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1/23/2020 c11 XD TOAD XD
then they had babies and got married and had more babies. And then some more babies. They had 12 babies total U-U.
1/23/2020 c1 XD TOAD XD
You f*cking gave me a heart attack. (not really but u get the point)

And the bright side you are very talented.

Also the way you write the thing where u explain the chapter reminds me of gacha
9/5/2019 c11 Guest
I'm just gonna say this... Your stories are freaking awesome bro! I totally love them! Are you available on wattpad too? Send me a hi at MsAwesomeness123 if so. :)
8/16/2015 c10 12kitkatmagicat
This is to: Theusedfangirl801

Defence and defense are different spellings of the same word. Defense is preferred in American English, and defence is preferred in all other main varieties of English, including Australian, British, and Canadian English.

So technically both are right!
HoweverThis is to: Theusedfangirl801

Defence and defense are different spellings of the same word. Defense is preferred in American English, and defence is preferred in all other main varieties of English, including Australian, British, and Canadian English.

So technically both are right!
I agree with you on the trialled tried thing!
(Did anyone else know that you're only allowed one review per chapter)?
8/16/2015 c11 kitkatmagicat
Oh my God! I love this soo much! Askel and Vanir make such a funny couple! But they really work, so do Eragon and Murtagh! I loved this fanfic so much! And your comments at he end of your chapters have me crying with laughter. You have done such a good job! I really really loved it! Well done!
8/15/2015 c2 kitkatmagicat
I love this chapter sooo much! I read a couple of other reviews on this chapter and completely disagree with them. Most say (as a generalization) that they didnt like it because it was all solved with a simple misunderstanding. Howver I think that this chapter was shear genius! I was soooo relieved that Eragon stayed alive and I think that it was important for Murtagh to have to go through the emotions he was forced to go through!

I shall end this by saying that I absolutely loved this chapter and had to review before I could read more so I could say just how much I disagree with those who were disappointed. Good job SK! I loved it!
4/7/2014 c11 2kolski
Me loves this... (seriously not kidding here!) After reading Red Haze and Black Mist the only word/s I can think off to describe how much I LOVE (- L-O-V-E) your writing is... well... you see, that's the problem... I can't think of one... I'm absolutely in love with these stories because I love how you've written them. The plot, action, story line (that kept me hooked so I ended doing a all-nighter reading them... yeeaahhh... slightly mad me here) are fantastic! I find you an amazing writer, and after reading these, I simply can't wait to read more of your stories! D (-Defiant fan here! D - )
100percenthorseMAD! x
10/17/2012 c8 8Secret world
loved it
10/16/2012 c5 Secret world
loved it cant wait to read more
6/10/2012 c11 bridgette22
These two stories have been absolutly fantastic. You write so well. I loved it. I am sad that there is no sequel. :)
1/27/2012 c11 6Viviane Renard
Your ending is spot on. It closes up this arc of the story well, without getting entangled in a side plot and losing its focus. While knowing how Eragon and Murtagh's date went would be interesting, this chapter gave us all the closure we needed.

I have one piece of advice for this story. I think that you do a wonderful job with Aksel as an OC character, but Balder as an OC lacked depth. Basically, he served as a plot device to help hook Eragon and Murtagh up, and gave up very easily when he realized Eragon still liked someone else. Even if he did cut his losses and break up with Eragon, I don't think he would have been so "buddy-buddy" with Eragon afterward and let him spill his heart about his troubles with Murtagh (salt on the wound, in my opinion). Even a nice guy has limits. If you had let his personality drive the plot instead of the plot drive his personality, I think I would have found him to be a much more interesting person. I adore your writing, and the scenes with Balder certainly weren't bad, but they didn't shine for me as much as the rest of your story. Overall, though, I love this story and think you did a great job with it!
11/30/2011 c11 3xXxStarStrifexXx
Really amazing series and a great ending. I like to imagine that after a hard struggle that it all worked out wonderfully :)
8/25/2011 c7 PhyscoBtch
This chapter was really good and I wanted to make a comment on your little ending comments Lolz my birthday is December 10th :D
6/3/2011 c11 Knytyngale
Sussiekitten,I really really have to tell you this,after reading red haze,black mist and obessession,i have concluded that you have to be the BEST INHERITENCE CYCLE FANFICTION WRITER I HAVE EVER ENCOUNTED,I have read numerous stories on the website from different genres and books,but you have to be one of the Best writers EVER! I really really look forward to more of your stories and i hope that you will maybe one day publish a book so that I can get a hard copy...haha

On an ending note,I have to say that given unlimited time and space i would re-read this story over and over again until I have fully memorised it.

Thank you for writing this story! I've enjoyed it lots!

Love,

Knytingale
3/20/2011 c11 OrphndAcct
Yay! Galbatorix is in prison! They can relax now. This is amazing, the story seems so real and the characters are all with their own past and their own character... :)
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