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12/24/2009 c1 ShanghstGood, I'd like to see more :D
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26CrapPishhIt's rather short for a first chapter, and doesn't have much depth, plot-wise or character-wise. There's no sense of pull factor to draw my interest to subsequent chapters here.
7/24/2008 c1 7ZethosWell, it's somewhat good, but I think you should write longer chapters and add more adjectives, you're leaving the looks of your characters to our minds.
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