
8/17/2008 c9
64epalladino
Sweet story. It made a plausible AU. I liked your take on Broom and was sorry to see him die. Will HB find out what caused the fire? I liked how you worked out the relationship with Liz.
Thanks, Beth

Sweet story. It made a plausible AU. I liked your take on Broom and was sorry to see him die. Will HB find out what caused the fire? I liked how you worked out the relationship with Liz.
Thanks, Beth
8/13/2008 c9
2simplexcontradiction
Aww I love me some Hellboy and Liz fluff. I was upset to see The End at the end of this chapter but I got excited to see that you are continuing on with a second part. I am eagerly waiting for part 2!

Aww I love me some Hellboy and Liz fluff. I was upset to see The End at the end of this chapter but I got excited to see that you are continuing on with a second part. I am eagerly waiting for part 2!
8/13/2008 c9 dc4168
I have enjoyed reading this story. Love the fire extinguisher! I could just see Manning doing that. Looking forward to part two.
I have enjoyed reading this story. Love the fire extinguisher! I could just see Manning doing that. Looking forward to part two.
8/11/2008 c1 Blushing.white.rose
Whoa, a lot of similarities? I only caught wind of a few, minor ones. Our stories begin with our take on the same scene...but what else?
I hope you're not suggestioning I'm copying any of her ideas. Plagerism is horrible. Something I will never take part in.
Whoa, a lot of similarities? I only caught wind of a few, minor ones. Our stories begin with our take on the same scene...but what else?
I hope you're not suggestioning I'm copying any of her ideas. Plagerism is horrible. Something I will never take part in.
8/11/2008 c8
2xXxKyra ReaperxXx
is it just me or does this story really have a lot of similarities to Envy01's story What If?

is it just me or does this story really have a lot of similarities to Envy01's story What If?
8/10/2008 c8 dc4168
I love the story and am always excited when there is a new chapter. Will there be more? Will their relationship continue to grow?
I love the story and am always excited when there is a new chapter. Will there be more? Will their relationship continue to grow?
8/10/2008 c8
1Lucifer Lazaro
that was a close call with hellboy and liz knowin CPR! it is going along great and can't wait for the other chapters!

that was a close call with hellboy and liz knowin CPR! it is going along great and can't wait for the other chapters!
8/10/2008 c8
2simplexcontradiction
I adore this story. You've got everyone in character and I love the interaction between Hellboy and Liz. It's just too cute. I'm looking forward to the next update.

I adore this story. You've got everyone in character and I love the interaction between Hellboy and Liz. It's just too cute. I'm looking forward to the next update.
8/6/2008 c5 dc4168
I like the new chapters. You have their voices. I am enjoying the mixtureof the movie with your writing. More please :)
I like the new chapters. You have their voices. I am enjoying the mixtureof the movie with your writing. More please :)
7/29/2008 c3 Miserlou
PLEASE keep writing this! PLEASE! It's REALLY good, and I want to see you finish it. PLEASE finish it. I hate when I get into a story and people just forget about it. I'm begging you to finish this!
PLEASE keep writing this! PLEASE! It's REALLY good, and I want to see you finish it. PLEASE finish it. I hate when I get into a story and people just forget about it. I'm begging you to finish this!