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5/6/2014 c1 28brothermine
aww this was great really sad, I think it's so sad when he says I told you what I need so can't help but feel you wantin to talk is just for you, so sad! but true, great piece I wish there was more focus on how this affected Oz & Cordy, great stuff!
5/12/2009 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
A great story. Very good.
3/13/2009 c1 HarrissBoBarriss
Great story, I always felt so sorry for Oz, what with this and the whole Willow being gay thing.
2/10/2009 c1 7Storm Warning
O very good! Writing style getting straight to the point! Very good.
10/26/2008 c1 270DragonyPhoenix
I like how your story suggests that nobody knows what's going on inside somebody else's head. Who'd have thunk that Oz would consider himself a bad boyfriend / person?

The last line is quite nice.
7/27/2008 c1 2goaty00
it's really good, it goes great with the actual character and is very well written :)
7/25/2008 c1 1colorthestars
I liked this. It's good to see someone writing Oz fanfiction.

However, I did see some things that you correct. "Confussion" in the first paragraph should be "confusion". "Miss treated" should be "mistreated". You had a typo of the word friendship in the third paragraph. Typo with the word the in the 4th paragraph.

And I'm not sure what you meant by "suducingly" in the third paragraph.

Sorry to nag but I thought you'd want to fix these little mistakes in this good story. It was definitely in character.
7/25/2008 c1 16Cliodhna
Very sweet, and sad.
7/24/2008 c1 15wintershine
cute. Oz was one of my favorite characters ever.

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