for Foeseeker9/15/2019 c2 
7Sebias of Redwall
Ooh! I think our heroine has made her entrance!
Happy writing to you!
7Sebias of RedwallOoh! I think our heroine has made her entrance!
Happy writing to you!
9/15/2019 c1 Sebias of Redwall
Wow! You said you wrote this when you were 12? I think its good so far!
I like it how you started off the story with the good ol' "Redwall feel" by having a bunch of excited Dibbuns begging for a story.
Happy writing to you!
Wow! You said you wrote this when you were 12? I think its good so far!
I like it how you started off the story with the good ol' "Redwall feel" by having a bunch of excited Dibbuns begging for a story.
Happy writing to you!
4/25/2019 c17 137Griffin Stone
... "the Ruthless" makes so much more sense now.
How did Gareth survive?!
137Griffin Stone... "the Ruthless" makes so much more sense now.
How did Gareth survive?!
4/24/2019 c16 Griffin Stone
-excited pointing- I recognized Tammo's dark as soon as you mentioned the buckle!
I always have loved the hares, so I'm glad to hear that the trio will play major roles!
Lin accidentally entering the forbidden room... should have see that one.
-excited pointing- I recognized Tammo's dark as soon as you mentioned the buckle!
I always have loved the hares, so I'm glad to hear that the trio will play major roles!
Lin accidentally entering the forbidden room... should have see that one.
4/23/2019 c9 Griffin Stone
Ye-es! I really, really wanted a Redwall book with good "vermin," so I cant wait go see where this goes!
Harm them to help them, hm? I'm curious now...
I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that the mystery squirrel is the first Lin?
Ye-es! I really, really wanted a Redwall book with good "vermin," so I cant wait go see where this goes!
Harm them to help them, hm? I'm curious now...
I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that the mystery squirrel is the first Lin?
4/23/2019 c7 Griffin Stone
Mm, yeah, I'd say that "Ruthless" fits. An otter tries to escape? "Drown him."
Mm, yeah, I'd say that "Ruthless" fits. An otter tries to escape? "Drown him."
7/22/2015 c55 2Wiechcheu1925
Uh, what happened to the story back at Redwall with Melanda? After chapter 41 there was nothing but Lin's story. I just want to know what happened there.
2Wiechcheu1925Uh, what happened to the story back at Redwall with Melanda? After chapter 41 there was nothing but Lin's story. I just want to know what happened there.
11/29/2014 c55 critic
This was such a tough book to read. It started out strong and kept my attention. But pretty soon it seems you lost interest or a view on where it was going. The Melanda storyline could have made for an interesting side plot. But The dream sequences were awkward at best. Slavrave went from beating characters and starving them to trying to kill the main character and they were still joking and good afterwards... what? All interactions with Lin and the bad guys were weird. I think you need to work on character development more.
This was such a tough book to read. It started out strong and kept my attention. But pretty soon it seems you lost interest or a view on where it was going. The Melanda storyline could have made for an interesting side plot. But The dream sequences were awkward at best. Slavrave went from beating characters and starving them to trying to kill the main character and they were still joking and good afterwards... what? All interactions with Lin and the bad guys were weird. I think you need to work on character development more.
5/12/2013 c44 selenecullen
the meeting is kinda like Lord of the rings
the meeting is kinda like Lord of the rings
5/11/2013 c40 selenacullen
of course Melanda fights well, her father and his best friend are highlander's (OK in Tam's case it's borderlands but still) anyway your doing a great job and I love this story, I really hope Lin gets to stay with Tam and Armel but yeah your doing Awesomely and I love this story
of course Melanda fights well, her father and his best friend are highlander's (OK in Tam's case it's borderlands but still) anyway your doing a great job and I love this story, I really hope Lin gets to stay with Tam and Armel but yeah your doing Awesomely and I love this story
5/23/2012 c3 5Ireland Ranger
I have to pause in my reading, but this is an awesome story so far and well written. Might become one of my Ultimate favorites!
Ave Maria! Viva Christo Rey!
5Ireland RangerI have to pause in my reading, but this is an awesome story so far and well written. Might become one of my Ultimate favorites!
Ave Maria! Viva Christo Rey!
2/23/2012 c55 1Lord Vrel
I personally loved it. Vrel's upset that he won't get a chance at Lin though. ;D I want to personally thank you for this story. It's given me many hours of entertainment, and alot of inspiration. And it made me cry, which has only happened maybe... 2 other times out of the thousands of books and fanfics I read. I really can't say much other then that, so, just, Thank you.
1Lord VrelI personally loved it. Vrel's upset that he won't get a chance at Lin though. ;D I want to personally thank you for this story. It's given me many hours of entertainment, and alot of inspiration. And it made me cry, which has only happened maybe... 2 other times out of the thousands of books and fanfics I read. I really can't say much other then that, so, just, Thank you.