for Foeseeker8/3/2008 c9 
30Adder of the Pit
It's pretty clear that Martin's 'companion' is the wonderful Ranguvar Foeseeker (made obvious by the title). I think Gareth is the role model for what good vermin should be like (iss cute, yes.) Non-evil vermin make me happy.
30Adder of the PitIt's pretty clear that Martin's 'companion' is the wonderful Ranguvar Foeseeker (made obvious by the title). I think Gareth is the role model for what good vermin should be like (iss cute, yes.) Non-evil vermin make me happy.
8/2/2008 c9 shoman
well, actually it wasnt very surprising. but you are still writing very well, cant believe tis story doesent have that many reviews.
well, actually it wasnt very surprising. but you are still writing very well, cant believe tis story doesent have that many reviews.
8/2/2008 c7 shoman
I liked it! and I think groomyer is living up to his title. preferably, dont make im like other vermin warlords who are big cowards when they dont have a hoard to defend them. maybe you should introduce some members of the slave crew and have them plan a rebelion.
keep on updating!
I liked it! and I think groomyer is living up to his title. preferably, dont make im like other vermin warlords who are big cowards when they dont have a hoard to defend them. maybe you should introduce some members of the slave crew and have them plan a rebelion.
keep on updating!
8/1/2008 c9 34Scyphi
Actually, I wasn't surprised at all, but that doesn't mean it wasn't a good chapter. ;)
34ScyphiActually, I wasn't surprised at all, but that doesn't mean it wasn't a good chapter. ;)
7/31/2008 c8 friggincreeps
OMG! Update soon! that was awesome! it was like it was actually Brian Jacques writing that!
OMG! Update soon! that was awesome! it was like it was actually Brian Jacques writing that!
7/30/2008 c7 9Awsam
I think its good so far. But the thing is wheres the 'Legend of Luke' part of the story? I see the Rackety Tam part of course but where is the 'Legend of Luke' part. O well if its not, fine. But nice going keep writing!
9AwsamI think its good so far. But the thing is wheres the 'Legend of Luke' part of the story? I see the Rackety Tam part of course but where is the 'Legend of Luke' part. O well if its not, fine. But nice going keep writing!
7/27/2008 c4 Awsam
This is so good so far. But um, if your writing about the black squirrel from 'The Ledgend of luke' her real name is Ranguvar Foeseeker. Unless you made her name Lindenton Tarenta on purpose then it's ok. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
This is so good so far. But um, if your writing about the black squirrel from 'The Ledgend of luke' her real name is Ranguvar Foeseeker. Unless you made her name Lindenton Tarenta on purpose then it's ok. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)