for Closer8/26/2012 c1 
2inklover93
I love this soooo much. I absolutely loved the books but I wanted to read something in his point of view and I couldn't have asked for a better story to fill that need!
2inklover93I love this soooo much. I absolutely loved the books but I wanted to read something in his point of view and I couldn't have asked for a better story to fill that need!
7/10/2011 c10 Tinted Basket
Now that was an interesting new take on things. Despite Meliara getting captured somewhere in there, everything went over quite well. It amused me to see Mel get the better of Vidanric a few times. Not to mention the amount of gossip in the court just spiked significantly. XD
Flavric was certainly a bit more out of his element. I liked this ending. Though I adore the real ending to the book, this one works as well. Seeing things from Vidanric's point of view is always interesting. Particularly because the book(s) are written entirely from Meliara's point of view. You did a good job of organizing the events here and making them believeable. Also that bit with Savona was hilarious. Vidranric really can't hide anything from him. lol
Nice story you've got here. It was a fun read. Nice job.
Now that was an interesting new take on things. Despite Meliara getting captured somewhere in there, everything went over quite well. It amused me to see Mel get the better of Vidanric a few times. Not to mention the amount of gossip in the court just spiked significantly. XD
Flavric was certainly a bit more out of his element. I liked this ending. Though I adore the real ending to the book, this one works as well. Seeing things from Vidanric's point of view is always interesting. Particularly because the book(s) are written entirely from Meliara's point of view. You did a good job of organizing the events here and making them believeable. Also that bit with Savona was hilarious. Vidranric really can't hide anything from him. lol
Nice story you've got here. It was a fun read. Nice job.
12/15/2009 c10 siromygod
Aw, too cute. I can`t believe it`s over. It`s sad, but at the same time, it`s like, whoo! Done! Hahaha, how`s it feel to finish?
Aw, too cute. I can`t believe it`s over. It`s sad, but at the same time, it`s like, whoo! Done! Hahaha, how`s it feel to finish?
8/13/2009 c9 1courtingu
its good! so happy you updated! cant wait to findout wat happens with flauvic. please update soon :)
1courtinguits good! so happy you updated! cant wait to findout wat happens with flauvic. please update soon :)
2/27/2009 c8 fictionlover26
Wonderful story! You brought a new twist to the characters and I love it. Please keep writing and updating often.
Wonderful story! You brought a new twist to the characters and I love it. Please keep writing and updating often.
2/20/2009 c8 2BonGarland
so i just read these books...and i have to say, you're doing a marvellous job. Thanks for writing!
2BonGarlandso i just read these books...and i have to say, you're doing a marvellous job. Thanks for writing!
2/15/2009 c8 siromygod
"I leaned into her and forgot about the heads exploding around us."
I love it.
Keep up the good work. =D
"I leaned into her and forgot about the heads exploding around us."
I love it.
Keep up the good work. =D
12/17/2008 c7 1courtingu
I so happy you updataed! Its so cute Mel and Danric! PLZ updata soon and fast cant wait to find out what happens next!
1courtinguI so happy you updataed! Its so cute Mel and Danric! PLZ updata soon and fast cant wait to find out what happens next!
12/17/2008 c7 4Wisteria-Blossoms
Aw! That was cute. I love how she totally forgot about being mad at him when she saw he was exhausted. That's love right there. Ha ha Seriously though you are so good at writing fluffy scenes I'm jealous.
4Wisteria-BlossomsAw! That was cute. I love how she totally forgot about being mad at him when she saw he was exhausted. That's love right there. Ha ha Seriously though you are so good at writing fluffy scenes I'm jealous.
10/20/2008 c6 Pepsi Keith
This last ch. was by far my fav. not only did the story move forward but we also got a little mel danric action. please update soon!
This last ch. was by far my fav. not only did the story move forward but we also got a little mel danric action. please update soon!
10/4/2008 c6 Wisteria-Blossoms
I love this story it's so romantic !
oh and sorry I didn't review sooner I've been too lazy to get on the computer.
Sh!”
“Don’t wake them.”
“I don’t want to wake them, but your constant shushing might do the trick.”
“Bran!”
ha ha so funny
I love this story it's so romantic !
oh and sorry I didn't review sooner I've been too lazy to get on the computer.
Sh!”
“Don’t wake them.”
“I don’t want to wake them, but your constant shushing might do the trick.”
“Bran!”
ha ha so funny
9/24/2008 c6 Guest
A very lovely, fluffy story (I like fluff, btw) : )
Update soon please!
A very lovely, fluffy story (I like fluff, btw) : )
Update soon please!