for A Broken Heart Can Be Deadly10/10/2012 c7 
7Sonicthehedgewolf
I really do enjoy stories like this. It's been a few years, are u ever gonna finish?
7SonicthehedgewolfI really do enjoy stories like this. It's been a few years, are u ever gonna finish?
5/18/2010 c7 Isobel
Plz Update Soon , I Hope The Cullens Will Find Bella As A Vamp X
Plz Update Soon , I Hope The Cullens Will Find Bella As A Vamp X
4/3/2009 c7 moon
god
god
1/31/2009 c7 meow114
nice i hope they end up killing edward so there is a happy ending with bella/Victoria as her mother :P
nice i hope they end up killing edward so there is a happy ending with bella/Victoria as her mother :P
1/27/2009 c7 Thefuturesours
WOW! update soon please please please please please please please please please i love this it's so GOOD
WOW! update soon please please please please please please please please please i love this it's so GOOD
1/27/2009 c7 Antz
OMG! Alysha i love this story it is so good seriously. at first i was like no victoria cant change Bella etc etc but it really works lol... but i have to say i hope in the end you are planning to let edward explain that he still loves her and her and victoria dont end up killing or hurting edward lol... that might be a bit much for me to handle if edward dies or gets hurt by bella and victoria haha lol... but it is very good and cant wait to read that next chapter... you sure know how to leave people in suspense lol... im hanging out for the next chapter (but not going to put presure on you lol)keep up the great writing... awsome job. love ya.
OMG! Alysha i love this story it is so good seriously. at first i was like no victoria cant change Bella etc etc but it really works lol... but i have to say i hope in the end you are planning to let edward explain that he still loves her and her and victoria dont end up killing or hurting edward lol... that might be a bit much for me to handle if edward dies or gets hurt by bella and victoria haha lol... but it is very good and cant wait to read that next chapter... you sure know how to leave people in suspense lol... im hanging out for the next chapter (but not going to put presure on you lol)keep up the great writing... awsome job. love ya.
1/19/2009 c7 2AliceReincarnation
Love it! Please update soon!
Well next chapter you could say if Bella has any powers. Then see how things go from there! ^-^
2AliceReincarnationLove it! Please update soon!
Well next chapter you could say if Bella has any powers. Then see how things go from there! ^-^
1/19/2009 c7 emomusickid
really good chapter i can't wait for the next chapter i want to know what jacib dose to bella and victoria so when you get time please update soon
really good chapter i can't wait for the next chapter i want to know what jacib dose to bella and victoria so when you get time please update soon
1/19/2009 c7 1dazzled-dreamer
I thought that was a great chapter! I can't wait to learn what Victoria's power is and I'd really like to see when the pack catches up with the girls! update soon :D
1dazzled-dreamerI thought that was a great chapter! I can't wait to learn what Victoria's power is and I'd really like to see when the pack catches up with the girls! update soon :D
1/18/2009 c7 Shakari
well it depends on if/when you want the Cullen's to come into the story... the next chapter should be not from Bella's POV but from one of the Cullen's. Alice has a vision that makes her want to check up on Bella... like its fuzzy you can tell Bella's there but you cant tell whats going on or around her. so she gets the family to go back to chack on her and they run into Jake or Seth... and they tell the Cullen's about the red-headed vampire turning Bella. the Cullens know the red-head is Victoria and want to find her to kill her for turning Bella because they think Bella didn't want it. But Bella has a power that makes other powers either bearly work or dont work at all. she can read minds, she has telikenesis or however you spell it, the blocking power that i talked about, when she reads minds it a mix between Jasper's Edward's and Aro's powers but she doesnt have to touch them, and a little bit of Victoria's power warning her about danger; but its not as strong as Victoria's gift. while the Cullen's are looking for them Bella and Victoria become closer friend. and Bella maybe is able to get Victoria to changer her diet. that or she changes over to humans. but this doesn't have to happen.
well it depends on if/when you want the Cullen's to come into the story... the next chapter should be not from Bella's POV but from one of the Cullen's. Alice has a vision that makes her want to check up on Bella... like its fuzzy you can tell Bella's there but you cant tell whats going on or around her. so she gets the family to go back to chack on her and they run into Jake or Seth... and they tell the Cullen's about the red-headed vampire turning Bella. the Cullens know the red-head is Victoria and want to find her to kill her for turning Bella because they think Bella didn't want it. But Bella has a power that makes other powers either bearly work or dont work at all. she can read minds, she has telikenesis or however you spell it, the blocking power that i talked about, when she reads minds it a mix between Jasper's Edward's and Aro's powers but she doesnt have to touch them, and a little bit of Victoria's power warning her about danger; but its not as strong as Victoria's gift. while the Cullen's are looking for them Bella and Victoria become closer friend. and Bella maybe is able to get Victoria to changer her diet. that or she changes over to humans. but this doesn't have to happen.