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6/17/2013 c4 8Grey Wolf4
This is a great Frey/Lyon and you did a great job in giving Lym and Miakis important roles too and the one with the Prince staying in Falena to help rebuild and becoming Commander of the Queen's Knights was the good ending I preferred quite frankly.
9/24/2008 c4 Soya Cincau
Good work of this fanfic...

It is not very good but somewhat good...

Well,i hope you can write more fanfic about Frey & Lyon

I ask for someone for writing a fanfic about major romance between Frey & Lyon after the Sun Rune War,but not the confession.

I hope can lasts 7 chapter or what...

Hope you can write this type of fic
9/21/2008 c3 Soya Cincau
hey,c'mon...

Continue the story please...

I really think this story is somewhat good but no one to reviews.

Anyway thank you for that email,and please continue it
9/15/2008 c1 Carven Unhappyboy
Hello!

Don't give up it please!

Although it less review and it seems no one are interesting

But I am the one who think this one is interesting.

So don't give up it,continue it.This is a really good fanfic
9/11/2008 c1 predator64
Wait...You say three people.Did you mean Lym,Miakis and Lyon.

I sugest there us 5 chapter...

4th chapter is about Lyon...

The final chapter is about the prince decision
9/11/2008 c3 predator64
Hello,please

Continue the chapter

This story really good,i hope you will continue the next chapter...
8/9/2008 c2 falenasfinest
uhm anou... ught...i'm stupid when reviewing...but i just want to say this...i like your fic...if you make it longer! te-hee!
8/5/2008 c2 5Tindercrest
Yay, first review~ :3

I like your pairings, honestly! ^^ You kept their personalities intact, so that's good~

My only criticism is that you need to know when to use the your pronoun and you're contraction (you're = you are)...otherwise, it's good~

Hope to see the next chapter soon~ Keep up the good work! ^^

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