9/21/2008 c1 7Arquenniel
This is so sweet! I think it's lovely - you did an awesome job of catching up Danric's entire range of thoughts and feelings. Nice work!

7/30/2008 c1 7RadhaBean
I thought this was very cute! The only thing I would corect is you forget a you when he was saying "the way you dance" but other than that I think it was great...write more please :)