for Hormones suck5/20/2010 c2 
16Goose-chan
Nice chappie :3
But you have Lily Luna P. That's James's granddaughter. And that's creepy ._.
~Goose-chan
16Goose-chanNice chappie :3
But you have Lily Luna P. That's James's granddaughter. And that's creepy ._.
~Goose-chan
2/17/2010 c1 77JJ Rust
This was pretty funny. I totally felt for James, though. Poor guy can't do anything right. Great job portraying Lily's mood swings.
One typo I caught: "ganna" should be "gonna"
Keep on writing.
77JJ RustThis was pretty funny. I totally felt for James, though. Poor guy can't do anything right. Great job portraying Lily's mood swings.
One typo I caught: "ganna" should be "gonna"
Keep on writing.
1/6/2010 c2 2whenitwasmagic
Very cute! Your grammar could use a little work, but everyone's does. I personally like the revised one better. I hope you keep writing!
♥ Ela.
2whenitwasmagicVery cute! Your grammar could use a little work, but everyone's does. I personally like the revised one better. I hope you keep writing!
♥ Ela.
10/3/2009 c2 funny bunny
this is hi-larious wish i were a member but sadly i'm a quizilla person (not sadly said)
this is hi-larious wish i were a member but sadly i'm a quizilla person (not sadly said)
9/6/2009 c1 2Windsor's Resident Elvendork
LMAO! This was HA-LARIOUS! I was laughing the whole time I read it. It's soo Lily and James.
1.Lily: What? I have your fat baby in me and he or she wants strawberry jelly now!
LOL XD That was my fav line. I loved this story so much!
2Windsor's Resident ElvendorkLMAO! This was HA-LARIOUS! I was laughing the whole time I read it. It's soo Lily and James.
1.Lily: What? I have your fat baby in me and he or she wants strawberry jelly now!
LOL XD That was my fav line. I loved this story so much!
4/19/2009 c1 kkkkk
I agree with you. i love it too.
I agree with you. i love it too.
4/1/2009 c1 Inactive.gone
hahahahahahahahaha! that was the best! where did you get the peanut butter and jelly taco idea?
hahahahahahahahaha! that was the best! where did you get the peanut butter and jelly taco idea?
3/26/2009 c1 2Daddy Long Leggs
Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! I laughed so hard at this! It was so cute!
2Daddy Long LeggsAhahahahahahahahahahahahaha! I laughed so hard at this! It was so cute!
3/7/2009 c2 MusicInMySoul
Aw...it's terribly cute :) I love it, update soon! you're an amazing writer! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story :)
Aw...it's terribly cute :) I love it, update soon! you're an amazing writer! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story :)