for Phobia7/15/2024 c8 
27windofmysoul
Wonderful story! I love the fluff! I am so glad these three are a family.
Thank you for writing this wholesome story. There needs to be more like this out there. This story and the others I have read have been real gems.
27windofmysoulWonderful story! I love the fluff! I am so glad these three are a family.
Thank you for writing this wholesome story. There needs to be more like this out there. This story and the others I have read have been real gems.
7/15/2024 c6 windofmysoul
Poor Riley. Pneumonia sucks!
Good thing he has a good friend in Ben.
Why is he so afraid of hospitals?
Poor Riley. Pneumonia sucks!
Good thing he has a good friend in Ben.
Why is he so afraid of hospitals?
6/17/2019 c8 Guest
Thank you TT_TT
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Thank you TT_TT
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5/6/2013 c8 19dolphinrain
Cute story.
Me: come, here Riley, I'll give you a hug! Hey, I'm 43 n still sleep with a teddy bear! My 92 year old Granny sleeps w a light on n a toy cow (she was raised on a farm).
Can I give Riley a hug?
19dolphinrainCute story.
Me: come, here Riley, I'll give you a hug! Hey, I'm 43 n still sleep with a teddy bear! My 92 year old Granny sleeps w a light on n a toy cow (she was raised on a farm).
Can I give Riley a hug?
8/23/2012 c8 23CelestialSonata7
Oooh, this was too sweet! Ben caring for Riley and being so worried about him, just, soooo cute! X3
I feel for Riley. I have slightly crippling fear of hospitals too. Though mine is totally irrational, whereas his is completely justified and beautifully angsty. Love it. :)
This story was so cute and perfect and amazing. I hope to see more National Treasure stories from you. You're so good at them!
23CelestialSonata7Oooh, this was too sweet! Ben caring for Riley and being so worried about him, just, soooo cute! X3
I feel for Riley. I have slightly crippling fear of hospitals too. Though mine is totally irrational, whereas his is completely justified and beautifully angsty. Love it. :)
This story was so cute and perfect and amazing. I hope to see more National Treasure stories from you. You're so good at them!
12/10/2011 c1 19ElvesAreEpic
This is like the first NT fic that I actually liked! Then I wen back and read all your other NT fics and reallyed loved them all! You should write more.
19ElvesAreEpicThis is like the first NT fic that I actually liked! Then I wen back and read all your other NT fics and reallyed loved them all! You should write more.
8/27/2011 c8 3tabbiecat
Hi!
Great story. :) I can just picture them all. Their expressions and voices and everything. So well done on that! 'Course getting pneumonia like that is fanfic convienient but hey - it's way more common in that world! ;) Thought Reily's story was really sad. Was it mentioned in the films at all? Or did you make it up completely? I think it would be terrifying to be in a situation like that. Wish people would drive better on the roads! Going to look at your other stories now. :)
3tabbiecatHi!
Great story. :) I can just picture them all. Their expressions and voices and everything. So well done on that! 'Course getting pneumonia like that is fanfic convienient but hey - it's way more common in that world! ;) Thought Reily's story was really sad. Was it mentioned in the films at all? Or did you make it up completely? I think it would be terrifying to be in a situation like that. Wish people would drive better on the roads! Going to look at your other stories now. :)
3/3/2011 c8 124Orpah
Oooh, this was a good read... But I think your latest is bettah. Which is great news for you, cause that means you're improving!
One thing I've noticed: you seem to like putting Riley and Ben through painful and emotional scenarios. XD
But suddenly, after reading your stories, you've made me a Riley fan. I mean, sure, I liked him when I saw the movies, but not enough to put him in the not-so-exclusive group that constitutes my favorite characters. I think he's made it now!
Also, you described the horror of not being able to breathe, or rather, seeing someone you care about being unable to breathe very vividly and well. I've sort of been in that situation myself, because my sister has severe asthma and she would have stress-induced attacks. She wouldn't get quite to the point where she couldn't breathe at all, but it was a pretty terrifying ordeal, and it scared me too.
My only suggestion for your future writing is that you follow your muse, since doing that has already caused you to write some very good stories. ;)
124OrpahOooh, this was a good read... But I think your latest is bettah. Which is great news for you, cause that means you're improving!
One thing I've noticed: you seem to like putting Riley and Ben through painful and emotional scenarios. XD
But suddenly, after reading your stories, you've made me a Riley fan. I mean, sure, I liked him when I saw the movies, but not enough to put him in the not-so-exclusive group that constitutes my favorite characters. I think he's made it now!
Also, you described the horror of not being able to breathe, or rather, seeing someone you care about being unable to breathe very vividly and well. I've sort of been in that situation myself, because my sister has severe asthma and she would have stress-induced attacks. She wouldn't get quite to the point where she couldn't breathe at all, but it was a pretty terrifying ordeal, and it scared me too.
My only suggestion for your future writing is that you follow your muse, since doing that has already caused you to write some very good stories. ;)
1/11/2011 c8 37GleeFangurl721
That was really good! You really should write more stories. Especially ones about Riley or NT. I promise I'll read them!
37GleeFangurl721That was really good! You really should write more stories. Especially ones about Riley or NT. I promise I'll read them!
8/24/2010 c2 SJ
I love all your stories, they make my life, not going to lie. :)
Keep 'em coming!
I love all your stories, they make my life, not going to lie. :)
Keep 'em coming!
7/25/2010 c8 41Reidluver
Awww, so cute! I just luv the friendship you have between these guys. And the story about why he's so claustrophobic is very sad, but it works. I can't imagine the feeling of hearing your sister cry out for help and not being able to do anything about it. :( So sad! Thanks for the great read!
41ReidluverAwww, so cute! I just luv the friendship you have between these guys. And the story about why he's so claustrophobic is very sad, but it works. I can't imagine the feeling of hearing your sister cry out for help and not being able to do anything about it. :( So sad! Thanks for the great read!