for Catherine11/28/2019 c1 r1965rd
When did loyal,loving Lizzy become so unsympathetic and cold toward Mary?
I got as far as the end of chapter 1 and started wondering whether Jane or Mr. Bennet were next on her s*** list.
When did loyal,loving Lizzy become so unsympathetic and cold toward Mary?
I got as far as the end of chapter 1 and started wondering whether Jane or Mr. Bennet were next on her s*** list.
1/26/2017 c3 Anna Biju
You write well, but I don't like your characterization of Lizzy. I don't think Lizzy would be heartless enough to let her own sister go to an asylum.
And she is not Mrs. Bennet, she is not obsessed with her sisters getting married.
You write well, but I don't like your characterization of Lizzy. I don't think Lizzy would be heartless enough to let her own sister go to an asylum.
And she is not Mrs. Bennet, she is not obsessed with her sisters getting married.
10/16/2012 c4 StrawberriCat
Will you ever write for this story again? It's absolute amazing! When I read "Mary" I was absolutely thrilled. And heartbroken, and impressed. I have only read a few Mary-centric stories, as there are few, but that one was the best one, hands down.
And reading "Catherine", I was definitely much more satisfied, as I personally hold a soft spot for Kitty. I cannot stress how much I long for this story to be continued, as I really, whole heartedly adore it!
-Critiques- There are some grammar issues, as in the occasional misplaced comma, or switching characters names with another. But other than that, I love the writing.
I sincerely am still hoping that you will consider continuing this, as this one is a treasure!
Will you ever write for this story again? It's absolute amazing! When I read "Mary" I was absolutely thrilled. And heartbroken, and impressed. I have only read a few Mary-centric stories, as there are few, but that one was the best one, hands down.
And reading "Catherine", I was definitely much more satisfied, as I personally hold a soft spot for Kitty. I cannot stress how much I long for this story to be continued, as I really, whole heartedly adore it!
-Critiques- There are some grammar issues, as in the occasional misplaced comma, or switching characters names with another. But other than that, I love the writing.
I sincerely am still hoping that you will consider continuing this, as this one is a treasure!
8/14/2008 c4 
20distorted realities
I agree with you about Jake and Leah. Seriously. How come poor Leah is still all alone? LAME! We got all this about her and then nothing.
This chapter was amazing. I was NOT expecting Lady Susan's death. But wow. It's just perfect. What is Kitty going to do now? She can do anything she wants.
20distorted realitiesI agree with you about Jake and Leah. Seriously. How come poor Leah is still all alone? LAME! We got all this about her and then nothing.
This chapter was amazing. I was NOT expecting Lady Susan's death. But wow. It's just perfect. What is Kitty going to do now? She can do anything she wants.
8/12/2008 c3 distorted realities
Gonna throw it out there that I'm one of the 10 people that actually liked Breaking Dawn even though it was kind of well bad. Then again I tend to like bad movies so why wouldn't I like bad books.
I feel so sorry for Kitty. She's torn because she truly cares for Strat. I think she loves him but cannot admit it to herself. She's so busy trying to be who everyone wants Kitty to be that she can't be who Kitty really is.
Good luck. And I am so proud of her standing up to Elizabeth in defense of her sisters that truly love her.
Gonna throw it out there that I'm one of the 10 people that actually liked Breaking Dawn even though it was kind of well bad. Then again I tend to like bad movies so why wouldn't I like bad books.
I feel so sorry for Kitty. She's torn because she truly cares for Strat. I think she loves him but cannot admit it to herself. She's so busy trying to be who everyone wants Kitty to be that she can't be who Kitty really is.
Good luck. And I am so proud of her standing up to Elizabeth in defense of her sisters that truly love her.
8/4/2008 c2 distorted realities
I just remembered you were writing this, and I'm quite excited to read it. Lady Susan is very interesting, and I doubt we've heard the last of Strat.
Poor, poor Kitty.
I just remembered you were writing this, and I'm quite excited to read it. Lady Susan is very interesting, and I doubt we've heard the last of Strat.
Poor, poor Kitty.
8/3/2008 c1 1Lorraine Seton
Can't say that I am as in love with this story as I am of Mary's. But great writing even if it was a bit hectic.
1Lorraine SetonCan't say that I am as in love with this story as I am of Mary's. But great writing even if it was a bit hectic.
8/3/2008 c2 llGeekGoddessll
interesting story. I like how you are writing Kitty. Are we going to hear more of Mary's life and Lydias?
interesting story. I like how you are writing Kitty. Are we going to hear more of Mary's life and Lydias?
8/2/2008 c1 26Lucille Brown
I don't think Mary would elope with anyone. And I have a hard trouble thinking that Elizabeth would act this way. But otherwise IO am alright with the story.
26Lucille BrownI don't think Mary would elope with anyone. And I have a hard trouble thinking that Elizabeth would act this way. But otherwise IO am alright with the story.