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10/8/2010 c1 25numb-butt
I like the one about Uranus, that was my favorite. I'm going to go use it on my girlfriend tomorrow. xD

-cough- Anyways, i'm a serious person. O3o

Pssh, who am I kidding? I cracked up.
1/1/2010 c1 16Ocearna
I read these on someone's profile yesterday! How to respond to pick up lines. xD Handy thing to know.

Loved it, though it did seem a little rushed. But I guess it's just meant to be a quick drabble? Nice either way. :)

-BC
1/24/2009 c1 36The Emerald Shapeshifter
LOL! This made me die. Seriously. I came back from the dead to review.

I love the pick up lines. Especially the astronaut one. XD

I wanna see those pick up lines...do you think you could send them to me so I can read them? XD
10/7/2008 c1 phillly24
i neva herd of those pick up lines except da last 2 but it was gud tho
8/28/2008 c1 1Astolat Maiden
Question, did Zexion have anything to do with this story?

Loved it though.
8/17/2008 c1 sam2loved1s
the pick up lines are funny hahaha
8/6/2008 c1 safety hazard 123
lol interesting
8/4/2008 c1 19Nanimonaimono
Lovely. xD I absolutely love both using pick-up lines (rarely in a serious manner, of course!) and finding comebacks for 'em. You used a couple of classics and gave Roxas his fair share of half-hearted snark, so I'm content as can be. Very entertaining!
8/4/2008 c1 3Kabbage Kat
That was way cute. And I can totally imagine it happening.

Nice work-I hope to see more!
8/4/2008 c1 kotilo
I splurted coffee on laptop screen while reading this xD Great one!
8/3/2008 c1 9Bubblegum Head
Wow

Hhaha

Greatness
8/3/2008 c1 deleted9account
ha! very nice! i love how you actually made Roxas a wise-cracker that played along! oh, here's two more i thought of, now that i'm in a crappy pick-up line mood: "I'm here to arrest you- you've stolen my heart" -or- "what has 142 teeth and holds back the incredible hulk? my zipper."

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