for Alternate Ending3/30/2010 c2 
2Luna-Looney-Lovegood15
you i have a lot of respect for your type of writing i try so hard putting details in, with juicy adjectives, making it sound as real as possible, you got a real gift! love it so far got hooked on the first chapter.
Love it keep it up
Rita
2Luna-Looney-Lovegood15you i have a lot of respect for your type of writing i try so hard putting details in, with juicy adjectives, making it sound as real as possible, you got a real gift! love it so far got hooked on the first chapter.
Love it keep it up
Rita
1/18/2010 c33 mysterious.myrtle
So cute I love this story! Please update soon you're doing an amazing job!
So cute I love this story! Please update soon you're doing an amazing job!
1/10/2010 c33 4XxiceflamexX
Aw, that's so sweet. :) And XD at the presents. Anyways, keep writing, and keep up the awesomeest work!
xx
4XxiceflamexXAw, that's so sweet. :) And XD at the presents. Anyways, keep writing, and keep up the awesomeest work!
xx
12/7/2009 c32 6You're Just As Sane As I Am
Cute! Great update! It was a cute little interaction between those two and I loved towards the middle when James and Sirius and Remus had that "fight"...so CUTE!
6You're Just As Sane As I AmCute! Great update! It was a cute little interaction between those two and I loved towards the middle when James and Sirius and Remus had that "fight"...so CUTE!
12/7/2009 c32 13lookmeintheeyesnickjonas
haha loved it (:! Lily and James are just the cutest couple ever! Hurry up and get them together girl:) love ya xx
13lookmeintheeyesnickjonashaha loved it (:! Lily and James are just the cutest couple ever! Hurry up and get them together girl:) love ya xx
12/6/2009 c32 Lauraw18
great chapter. I love Lily and James together their just so perfect for each other. Update soon
great chapter. I love Lily and James together their just so perfect for each other. Update soon
12/6/2009 c32 4x-Falling-Stardust-x
sqe! sorry, but that is just so cute! and your rant definitely worked and i hope you will post more soon! i LOVE it! x
4x-Falling-Stardust-xsqe! sorry, but that is just so cute! and your rant definitely worked and i hope you will post more soon! i LOVE it! x
11/30/2009 c31 13lookmeintheeyesnickjonas
ah new moon! 'you know your kinda beautiful' :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
haha AMAZING chapter-it was totally adorable! loved it girl! x
13lookmeintheeyesnickjonasah new moon! 'you know your kinda beautiful' :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
haha AMAZING chapter-it was totally adorable! loved it girl! x
11/22/2009 c29 LittleRed22
ok this chapter 'the massage' is my favourite.i think i just like how you developed the characters feelings and the massage it was hot-wellwritten.
also like the chapter 'my hero' tho cause the writing is so detailed and the suspense and drama was well brought across.
:) there you are my dear.
ok this chapter 'the massage' is my favourite.i think i just like how you developed the characters feelings and the massage it was hot-wellwritten.
also like the chapter 'my hero' tho cause the writing is so detailed and the suspense and drama was well brought across.
:) there you are my dear.
11/22/2009 c31 LittleRed22
i love this story!
please please update very quickly.
iv jst read all 31 chapters in one go.thats how dedicated i am.
i love that lily and james getting together hasnt jst happened quickly.its more realistic...
gutted how riley and sirius jst ended tho.i want to see how their relationshp is going to be now.
so yeah
please please update
i love this story!
please please update very quickly.
iv jst read all 31 chapters in one go.thats how dedicated i am.
i love that lily and james getting together hasnt jst happened quickly.its more realistic...
gutted how riley and sirius jst ended tho.i want to see how their relationshp is going to be now.
so yeah
please please update
11/22/2009 c31 4XxiceflamexX
Heya, Awesome chap. :) And so cute and sweet, and loving Sirius. You missed out Remus though. :P Oh, and you managed to avoiding the fighting ;) Awesome chapter, can't wait to read the next. x
4XxiceflamexXHeya, Awesome chap. :) And so cute and sweet, and loving Sirius. You missed out Remus though. :P Oh, and you managed to avoiding the fighting ;) Awesome chapter, can't wait to read the next. x
11/21/2009 c31 9BlueSkyMornings
haha : D I just saw New Moon today so excuse me when I laugh at the "You're kinda beautiful" line, which I'm sure you got from the movie. And reading your AN I'm right :D I saw it for my second time today! I love Jackson Rathbone!
Good story! I can't wait till they go out! SO CUTE!
9BlueSkyMorningshaha : D I just saw New Moon today so excuse me when I laugh at the "You're kinda beautiful" line, which I'm sure you got from the movie. And reading your AN I'm right :D I saw it for my second time today! I love Jackson Rathbone!
Good story! I can't wait till they go out! SO CUTE!
9/7/2009 c30 1Eternally Inquisitive
Mainly B, but you could hurry it up just a "weensy-bit" , Great story, I can actually visualize the characters as real people. Good job!
1Eternally InquisitiveMainly B, but you could hurry it up just a "weensy-bit" , Great story, I can actually visualize the characters as real people. Good job!
9/4/2009 c30 4XxiceflamexX
Heya...I give this an...*drum roll* E. :) Yes it's a bit rushed but no I don't really care but yes I do love your story. :) Keep up the amazing writing, ily. xx
4XxiceflamexXHeya...I give this an...*drum roll* E. :) Yes it's a bit rushed but no I don't really care but yes I do love your story. :) Keep up the amazing writing, ily. xx