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9/3/2009 c30 mysterious.myrtle
B!

Awesome chapter I want to know how Riley and Sirius are really feeling!

xx
9/3/2009 c30 13lookmeintheeyesnickjonas
I think C and B. B because your story is perfect :D but i think time wise it should be further on in the school year :)
9/3/2009 c29 lookmeintheeyesnickjonas
I loved the ending! its was adorable :D they are the cutest couple ever! wow i haven't read fanfics in so long because ive been working but yours was the first one i clicked on :) and another chapter to go! yay
9/2/2009 c30 15NobodyCanKnow
hahahaha i loved the lily and james interaction! really good! this was fun! nice little chapter. update soon!
9/2/2009 c30 18racecar47
I vote B

post more soon

and soonner this time to PLEASE
9/2/2009 c30 3hellfireholy
B - but i wish for more fluffy LJ. i think that was really stupid of sirius but i also think he's hurting much more than he's letting on.

the invisibility cloak scee as SO sweet, i loved it.

update soon x
9/2/2009 c30 3The-Real-James-Potter
B

good chappy :D
8/21/2009 c29 4XxiceflamexX
Aww...that's so sweet :P I really liked that chapter, and I have to say...finally! You gave up the arguments :P and they're faling in lurve *sings in sickly sweet voice* James and Lily, sitting in the tree...

You get the idea...and that I'm a bit hyper. Anyway, write more, Luve ya! :)

xx
8/21/2009 c29 3hellfireholy
aww silly confused lily x
8/21/2009 c29 3askenandore92
i reallyy like this!
8/19/2009 c29 2M333gan
Why hello again!

This just keep getting better and better,love the sexual tension.

Know what?I feel so stupid:In my last review i spelt Sirius wrong...oops

Anywho,

AWESOME!

-Megan
8/19/2009 c29 mysterious.myrtle
That was so cute! Good job I love this story!

Also...

My other favourite stories at the moment are The House of Hell by Love2Love and Rainbow: An Arranged Marriage of Malfoy & Granger by ReWritten-string-of-stories.

Sorry if you have already read them but they are both amazing and very original!

Keep up the good work!

xx
8/19/2009 c29 18racecar47
I have a fanfic its in my profile and I write it

lol

I liked this chapter

its by far one of my favorits

post more soon
8/19/2009 c29 15NobodyCanKnow
BRILLIANT! haha i have never read a massage fic with james and lily lol like it though! a lot! haha update super soon!
7/27/2009 c28 4x-Falling-Stardust-x
awesome story! how were the exams? i gave up writing during mine..so kudos to you for continuing an excellent story! x PS i love your penname!
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