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11/5/2016 c7 Guest
Nice Story! I loved the part when Heiji mailed himself to himself!
1/16/2010 c7 14nequam-tenshi
is this the end? if not then please continue!
7/30/2009 c1 DetectiveCgirl95
so kawaii *fan girl squeal* X3 xD
4/15/2009 c7 43Jess Maximoff
Please update a new chapter for Red Eye's Friend. I liked the first chapter and want to know what happened to Joey. And the pharaoh's name is Atem and they call him Yami not Yomi. Her name is Tea not Taya. And it's Wheeler not Weller.
9/9/2008 c7 16M.P-chan
Nice fic! I like baby Heiji XD Though I do have one complaint. As an Ellery Queen fan, I couldn't help but notice that you probably haven't read any of the Queen books. Ellery Queen is a man, not a lady! XD
8/20/2008 c1 1ritz-O-kid
Love it!
8/20/2008 c7 ske
i really loved this chapter. im still looking forward to the next chapter. this story is really starting to take off.

update: my foot doesnt hurt as much anymore. doctor says i could be walking next week.
8/20/2008 c7 50Miyano Ran
Um...I think that you must be consistent. There are times that you use J-names while sometimes you use E-names...

Well, Martin, is the English name of Heiji's dad, if you don't know, I'll tell you, Heiji's dad's J-name is Heizo. Unfortunately, I forgot his mom's name

I know that norm is the short cut for normal, but, in making a story, you must spell it all out "normal"

Um...I think your story lacks a little impact on the "being shock about infant Heiji" part. You should have made it more like suspense, but, I still like this! It was just too calm, this story.

It was a sweet chapter! Update! I'll be expecting that!
8/17/2008 c5 12Solera
ah could you use Kogoro/Mouri instead of Moore? It's a bit... well you know what... you use the Japanese characters name so... I think you should use Kogoro...

just my opinion .
8/16/2008 c6 5Yin7
really cute chapter.
8/16/2008 c6 50Miyano Ran
awesome
8/16/2008 c5 Miyano Ran
Hm...honestly, I could give this case about a 5.7 over 10... it's not that good a case since it lacks proofs, liebility, and clues but i think that this still deserves a plause...clap0clapclap

Sorry if I offended you, I don't mean to be rude, i'm not saying that the case is ugly or anything like that but it is not really that good... I just want to give a friendly comment. I was just being honest, don't worry, not many people in this world can write elabourate murders anyway, I CANNOT EVEN WRITE A DECENT MURDER CASE...I'm having a really hard time...so don't worry, I'm sure you will improve your writing through the years! Keep up! You have my support-Miyano Ran-senpai
8/16/2008 c4 Miyano Ran
Aww...cute chapter! And I thought in the real anime Conan calls Ai as haibara, but in your fic, they seem close and he calls her Ai here...

cute cute cute story! great job! Really funny!

although it's odd that Shinichi already liked soccer when he was an infant...
8/16/2008 c3 Miyano Ran
Nice ^_^
8/16/2008 c2 Miyano Ran
I couldn't stop laughing when Ai mentioned that heiji was cute! Love that scene! Love this fanfic! Great great humor too!
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