for Leah's Happy Ending9/1/2008 c3 
5Newfoundland Novelist
*blink blink* Renesmee died? How! Why? :( Poor Nessie.
I suppose I see how this can set up Jacob and Leah, but still...
BTW, did Seth stop phasing then to be with Hannah? How old is Hannah? How old is Seth now? Has he aged? (Sorry, REALLY curious person). I'll just keep reading and leave you be. Update soon. ^^
5Newfoundland Novelist*blink blink* Renesmee died? How! Why? :( Poor Nessie.
I suppose I see how this can set up Jacob and Leah, but still...
BTW, did Seth stop phasing then to be with Hannah? How old is Hannah? How old is Seth now? Has he aged? (Sorry, REALLY curious person). I'll just keep reading and leave you be. Update soon. ^^
9/1/2008 c4 5toffeecakesxox
Ooh, can't wait for an update! Awesome chapter! :D
Seth's so lovable! Even when he's more than 150 years old! :D
Strawberry xx
5toffeecakesxoxOoh, can't wait for an update! Awesome chapter! :D
Seth's so lovable! Even when he's more than 150 years old! :D
Strawberry xx
8/20/2008 c3 toffeecakesxox
Poor Jacob! :( Well... at least Leah's there to comfort him in his time of need. Hehe.
And, I mean, I don't HATE Nessie, but I don't LIKE her either. She's sorta in the middle for me.
Can't wait for an update!
Strawberry xx
Poor Jacob! :( Well... at least Leah's there to comfort him in his time of need. Hehe.
And, I mean, I don't HATE Nessie, but I don't LIKE her either. She's sorta in the middle for me.
Can't wait for an update!
Strawberry xx
8/20/2008 c1 toffeecakesxox
I don't mind Renesmee but I LOVE Jacob and Leah. This is awesome so far!
Strawberry xx
I don't mind Renesmee but I LOVE Jacob and Leah. This is awesome so far!
Strawberry xx
8/17/2008 c3 6battante
I like this story so far! But I was sad that Nessie died :(
Oh well, Leah can have Jacob now! Right? Wonderful job :D
6battanteI like this story so far! But I was sad that Nessie died :(
Oh well, Leah can have Jacob now! Right? Wonderful job :D
8/15/2008 c3 15The One Called Demetra
umm...yeah. So...she just died? That fast? With no explanation? And barely any emotion or description?
Work on that.
15The One Called Demetraumm...yeah. So...she just died? That fast? With no explanation? And barely any emotion or description?
Work on that.
8/13/2008 c3 supersonic418
aww renesmee died? thats just sick. haha. now leah has to comfort jake i guess? (muahahaha) very spiteful of you to kill nessie off, how BOLD. either way, its awesome! you just gotta love leah's hate!
p.s. ryan lochte IS cute (: but not as cute as phelps. phelps is absolutely amazingly crazily awesome. and on top of that, phelpsy is a hottie :D
aww renesmee died? thats just sick. haha. now leah has to comfort jake i guess? (muahahaha) very spiteful of you to kill nessie off, how BOLD. either way, its awesome! you just gotta love leah's hate!
p.s. ryan lochte IS cute (: but not as cute as phelps. phelps is absolutely amazingly crazily awesome. and on top of that, phelpsy is a hottie :D
8/11/2008 c2 livmarie727
I have to admit-I was a little disappointed when Steph didn't make Jeah canon-but I do like Jessie as well. I love how you're keeping this story canon and introducing Jeah at the same time. Please update soon!
I have to admit-I was a little disappointed when Steph didn't make Jeah canon-but I do like Jessie as well. I love how you're keeping this story canon and introducing Jeah at the same time. Please update soon!
8/8/2008 c2 5Newfoundland Novelist
Interesting take on things. I'm with you, I really wanted Leah to have a happy ending. I found it ironic that the last chapter was called "The Happily Ever After" but Leah just sort of dropped off before that. It was very sad.
Can't wait to find out Leah's happy ending. ;)
Oh, and Stephanie Meyer made ALICE so that makes everything else okay. Alice rocks. ^^ (I like Seth a lot too though...)
5Newfoundland NovelistInteresting take on things. I'm with you, I really wanted Leah to have a happy ending. I found it ironic that the last chapter was called "The Happily Ever After" but Leah just sort of dropped off before that. It was very sad.
Can't wait to find out Leah's happy ending. ;)
Oh, and Stephanie Meyer made ALICE so that makes everything else okay. Alice rocks. ^^ (I like Seth a lot too though...)
8/8/2008 c2 supersonic418
ohh thank you for writing this story! i have totally been wondering about leah's future because breaking dawn really was an eye opener for me on leah. i have always sympathized for her and now somebody finally gets it! THANK YOU. haha.
ohh thank you for writing this story! i have totally been wondering about leah's future because breaking dawn really was an eye opener for me on leah. i have always sympathized for her and now somebody finally gets it! THANK YOU. haha.
8/8/2008 c1 7wirbil
I second the fact that if I wrote Breaking Dawn it would be totally different. :D
It's great! Though executed in an unLeah-ish fashion I have a feeling she's probably say something along those lines anyway so great job!
7wirbilI second the fact that if I wrote Breaking Dawn it would be totally different. :D
It's great! Though executed in an unLeah-ish fashion I have a feeling she's probably say something along those lines anyway so great job!
8/6/2008 c1 Whatever
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Conitue! I must know! AH!1I have no idea why I didn't just email u. Wait. I no. I was too lazy.
Ps.
ABBY WAZ HEARE!1