for Meant for each other10/14/2017 c7 
5RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga
I hope you will be able to post more when you have the time to please please please post more. the story is so AMAZING I love it so much D
5RoyalPrincessHinataHyugaI hope you will be able to post more when you have the time to please please please post more. the story is so AMAZING I love it so much D
2/28/2011 c7 Naruto The Highlander
A nice story, but also difficult to read. Try seperating the thoughts and dialogue of the characters from the paragraphs. It will make the story easier to read for people and you also won't end up with these gigantic paragraphs either. You will probably get more new readers to the story as well.
A nice story, but also difficult to read. Try seperating the thoughts and dialogue of the characters from the paragraphs. It will make the story easier to read for people and you also won't end up with these gigantic paragraphs either. You will probably get more new readers to the story as well.
2/28/2011 c7 5Rose Tiger
Good chapter, but the text is a bit too hard to read. Please double space each speech and thought from the narration.
5Rose TigerGood chapter, but the text is a bit too hard to read. Please double space each speech and thought from the narration.
2/16/2009 c5 5Rose Tiger
That was good. Keep going but work on your spelling. You spelled different and hallelujah wrong.
5Rose TigerThat was good. Keep going but work on your spelling. You spelled different and hallelujah wrong.
2/16/2009 c1 9oceanmoon
Hi, I really like it it's so cute. um, If you liked spirited away, do you mind reading and reviewing my first fanfic.
9oceanmoonHi, I really like it it's so cute. um, If you liked spirited away, do you mind reading and reviewing my first fanfic.
10/6/2008 c1 Darth-Taisha
Nicely done for your first story. You just need to spell check it and have someone else proof it for you to catch small grammar errors and it will be really good.
Nicely done for your first story. You just need to spell check it and have someone else proof it for you to catch small grammar errors and it will be really good.
10/6/2008 c4 Gravity The Wizard
Awsome Update! Too bad the young couple arn't willing to express there feelings to each other.
Awsome Update! Too bad the young couple arn't willing to express there feelings to each other.