for Revelation of the Moon8/20/2008 c1 
7Spiffswishy
This is a really nice poem you should write some about H2o. You are very talented.
7SpiffswishyThis is a really nice poem you should write some about H2o. You are very talented.
8/6/2008 c1 5gangstapenguinduck lover
I'm not trying to be mean-but I don't understand the tempo, or rhyme or...really anything that makes this a poem.
It's more like an ongoing sentence that's stretched out awkwardly...
And the realization is what was I was really intrigued about-and then it turned out to be something that we figured out by the fifth chapter in the first book.
5gangstapenguinduck loverI'm not trying to be mean-but I don't understand the tempo, or rhyme or...really anything that makes this a poem.
It's more like an ongoing sentence that's stretched out awkwardly...
And the realization is what was I was really intrigued about-and then it turned out to be something that we figured out by the fifth chapter in the first book.