7/31/2004 c7 1moonfyre
WAIT JUST A MINUTE! you CAN'T just leave it off THERE! I have to KNOW what happens next!...wah!
WAIT JUST A MINUTE! you CAN'T just leave it off THERE! I have to KNOW what happens next!...wah!
7/30/2004 c1 moonfyre
aw...thats so sad! I actually feel sorry for dudders...o well, i hope harry goes w/ siri, cuz I LUV SIRIUS! (and moony too!)
aw...thats so sad! I actually feel sorry for dudders...o well, i hope harry goes w/ siri, cuz I LUV SIRIUS! (and moony too!)
7/24/2004 c7 Rebound
This really is an awsum fic. I really love it. I wish you would keep writing! Y did u trash it? PLZ KEEP GOIN! :D. If you do, plz let me know... PLZ!
This really is an awsum fic. I really love it. I wish you would keep writing! Y did u trash it? PLZ KEEP GOIN! :D. If you do, plz let me know... PLZ!
1/15/2004 c7 allison
woow... this is great! please update!
woow... this is great! please update!
7/5/2003 c7 1Lenai Riddle
ok then ron is a *Bit* jealous i believe...
hm...
oh yes please keep writing more
ok then ron is a *Bit* jealous i believe...
hm...
oh yes please keep writing more
5/24/2003 c1 FloridaFlower
I love Audry! How can you hate anyone that calls Malfoy Dumb Ass? Keep writing, I know it says "Trashed" but puh-lease keep writing. Love this one; I know, I tell ya all the time! ;)
I love Audry! How can you hate anyone that calls Malfoy Dumb Ass? Keep writing, I know it says "Trashed" but puh-lease keep writing. Love this one; I know, I tell ya all the time! ;)
5/17/2003 c6 7Calen
I don't like this Audrey cow. Can you kill her off? Get Voldemort to torture and kill her. Or maybe she could fall of her broom for real and go SPLAT!
I don't like this Audrey cow. Can you kill her off? Get Voldemort to torture and kill her. Or maybe she could fall of her broom for real and go SPLAT!
5/11/2003 c7 Anonymous
Why, why, why? ~Sob Sob~ I love this story! Why; why does it deserve to be trashed? The best things in life are always left behind, like in that Counting Crows w/ Vanessa Carlton song "Big Yellow Taxi." Why, I ask, Why, why, why?
Why, why, why? ~Sob Sob~ I love this story! Why; why does it deserve to be trashed? The best things in life are always left behind, like in that Counting Crows w/ Vanessa Carlton song "Big Yellow Taxi." Why, I ask, Why, why, why?
4/26/2003 c7 Anonymous
The best story of VeRyWiLdWiTcH's. Shame it was trashed. Down Memory Lane is so boring; I almost forgort it was Harry Potter as none of the Harry Potter characters are part of the plot.
The best story of VeRyWiLdWiTcH's. Shame it was trashed. Down Memory Lane is so boring; I almost forgort it was Harry Potter as none of the Harry Potter characters are part of the plot.
4/26/2003 c7 Anonymous
The best story of VeRyWiLdWiTcH's. Shame it was trashed. Down Memory Lane is so boring; I almost forgort it was Harry Potter as none of the Harry Potter characters are part of the plot.
The best story of VeRyWiLdWiTcH's. Shame it was trashed. Down Memory Lane is so boring; I almost forgort it was Harry Potter as none of the Harry Potter characters are part of the plot.
3/29/2003 c7 ZetaBee
Not that my review will matter but.. Oh BUSTED!
Not that my review will matter but.. Oh BUSTED!
1/19/2003 c7 7Lady Knight of Kennan
oh please update this story soon... i kno you havent since sugust.. or sumthing... but please please please please please please update soon! its a great story... i can already see that audry is gonna be harry's sis, and hes gonna fall in luv wit hermione, and rons falling for audry... its exciting! please update! i luv your story! its really good, so you should update! happy writing!
tootles!
LKoK
oh please update this story soon... i kno you havent since sugust.. or sumthing... but please please please please please please update soon! its a great story... i can already see that audry is gonna be harry's sis, and hes gonna fall in luv wit hermione, and rons falling for audry... its exciting! please update! i luv your story! its really good, so you should update! happy writing!
tootles!
LKoK
12/18/2002 c7 Guest
I don't like Audry. You could've written a good story without her, she's in no way necessary, not to mention she has Mary Sue potential.
Sorry if you're offended, but that's just my opinion.
I don't like Audry. You could've written a good story without her, she's in no way necessary, not to mention she has Mary Sue potential.
Sorry if you're offended, but that's just my opinion.
9/24/2002 c8 Joojama
You have a nice style and the dialogue flows freely. All in all you're a promising writer. But in my opinion Audry is a potential Mary Sue and you might want to work on including some faults. Secondly, I think you should be happy for the reviews you get instead of getting annoyed at people for giving you what might be considered lesser quality reviews. I agree with you; the first three types of reviews aren't particularly helpful. But still, rejoice that the thorns have a rose and not vice verse. ;-)
You have a nice style and the dialogue flows freely. All in all you're a promising writer. But in my opinion Audry is a potential Mary Sue and you might want to work on including some faults. Secondly, I think you should be happy for the reviews you get instead of getting annoyed at people for giving you what might be considered lesser quality reviews. I agree with you; the first three types of reviews aren't particularly helpful. But still, rejoice that the thorns have a rose and not vice verse. ;-)