2/9/2009 c11 anonymous
WHAT? NO! JESSICA CAN'T DIE!
WHAT? NO! JESSICA CAN'T DIE!
2/9/2009 c11 Elligoat
Hmm. "Take me instead!" Isn't that the line from "Beauty and the Beast"
Kinda short story. Kinda annoying end. Kinda wanna know get Sabrina's POV, as in her POV at the mall, coz there might be a good story in that.
I da'know, just a suggestion!
Alright, cut to the chase, WHERE IS ALL THE PUCKxSABRINA?
seriously! I'm not proud to say that I'm one of those soppy girls who absolutely LOVE love stories between Puck 'n' Sabrina.
(No offence if you have taken offence but I'm kinda insulting myself so yeah.)
9\10 is your rating from me, Elligoat. I might give you a cookie and 10\10 if the next chapters good.
Hmm. "Take me instead!" Isn't that the line from "Beauty and the Beast"
Kinda short story. Kinda annoying end. Kinda wanna know get Sabrina's POV, as in her POV at the mall, coz there might be a good story in that.
I da'know, just a suggestion!
Alright, cut to the chase, WHERE IS ALL THE PUCKxSABRINA?
seriously! I'm not proud to say that I'm one of those soppy girls who absolutely LOVE love stories between Puck 'n' Sabrina.
(No offence if you have taken offence but I'm kinda insulting myself so yeah.)
9\10 is your rating from me, Elligoat. I might give you a cookie and 10\10 if the next chapters good.
1/11/2009 c10 unreliablekamikaze
...wow.
You love cliff hangers.
Oh well. This chapter told us Jessica got away from Nottingham.
You're not gonna describe how Nottingham is inflicted severe wounds and dies a gory death, are you?
Update soon1
iMAJ ENN
...wow.
You love cliff hangers.
Oh well. This chapter told us Jessica got away from Nottingham.
You're not gonna describe how Nottingham is inflicted severe wounds and dies a gory death, are you?
Update soon1
iMAJ ENN
1/7/2009 c10 1Bleached Rose
Go Mr Canis! I have a feeling Nottingham's gonna get a TERRIBLE beating! Oh well, he deserves it I guess...Anyway update soon!
Go Mr Canis! I have a feeling Nottingham's gonna get a TERRIBLE beating! Oh well, he deserves it I guess...Anyway update soon!
1/7/2009 c9 Bleached Rose
OMG! Nottingham kidnapped Jessica!(I wonder what he's gonna do with her?...nevermind I'm guessing I don't wanna know!)
OMG! Nottingham kidnapped Jessica!(I wonder what he's gonna do with her?...nevermind I'm guessing I don't wanna know!)
12/24/2008 c9 AlwaysInLoveWithTheVillain
OMG! she got kidnapped by Nottingham! Love this story by the way... update soon!
OMG! she got kidnapped by Nottingham! Love this story by the way... update soon!
11/27/2008 c8 b
love it!next chpter?
love it!next chpter?
11/25/2008 c8 HI
PLEASE STILL COUNT MY VOTE! my computer fried and the Library is computer-less! I herby vote Romance!
PLEASE STILL COUNT MY VOTE! my computer fried and the Library is computer-less! I herby vote Romance!
11/23/2008 c8 Iza
wonderful
jessica has really cool powers. i hope that she will do her magic on sabrina soon as well
wonderful
jessica has really cool powers. i hope that she will do her magic on sabrina soon as well
11/17/2008 c8 la la la la la
u were going to do Jessica and Jake? how old is he anyway? in case ur not, it's late and im tired, so don't blame me if i am acting crazy. for future chapters, i am guessing that u will have Jessica go to the ball, and every one will be nice to her, but ask her a bunch of questions about how she got to b an everafter, and everything. Something will happen and then something else will and yeah. never mind.
u were going to do Jessica and Jake? how old is he anyway? in case ur not, it's late and im tired, so don't blame me if i am acting crazy. for future chapters, i am guessing that u will have Jessica go to the ball, and every one will be nice to her, but ask her a bunch of questions about how she got to b an everafter, and everything. Something will happen and then something else will and yeah. never mind.
11/5/2008 c1 12The Literature Dragon
I am very sorry if I'm late and you've already stopped updating this story, I've probably already read your story, if you get this twice because you have more then one story, then I apologize. Anyway, if you haven't already done so, there is now a sisters Grimm community, if you can, please switch your stories to fit the section. Thank you! Look on the brightside, you got a free review!
His-Crooked-§mile-1901♥
I am very sorry if I'm late and you've already stopped updating this story, I've probably already read your story, if you get this twice because you have more then one story, then I apologize. Anyway, if you haven't already done so, there is now a sisters Grimm community, if you can, please switch your stories to fit the section. Thank you! Look on the brightside, you got a free review!
His-Crooked-§mile-1901♥
10/13/2008 c7 1Bleached Rose
I'm guessing they'll go to the ball and Charming does something really stupid and everyone votes for Heart!
I'm guessing they'll go to the ball and Charming does something really stupid and everyone votes for Heart!
10/13/2008 c8 Guest
So if the pairing wasn't Sabrina/Puck or Jessica/Jake was it Relda/Canis? Though if you decide to change to romance I recommend Sabrina/Puck!
So if the pairing wasn't Sabrina/Puck or Jessica/Jake was it Relda/Canis? Though if you decide to change to romance I recommend Sabrina/Puck!
10/4/2008 c8 ariana
i like the story but if you want ideas are you gonna hav sab/puck cause if you do then why don't you make the plot jessica goes to the ball and asks puck to go with her... and such.
i like the story but if you want ideas are you gonna hav sab/puck cause if you do then why don't you make the plot jessica goes to the ball and asks puck to go with her... and such.