5/27/2009 c2 parkplace
Are you ever going to finish this story. If not, you should let us know so we will stop waiting.
Are you ever going to finish this story. If not, you should let us know so we will stop waiting.
2/11/2009 c2 11Uxiegirl
Bella is pissed! I didn't know she could be so harsh! Still, it's nice to see Edward come back. Just remember, she's too old for him now. ;D
By the way, thanks for reviewing my story, "Giomanapped". Every review counts! Keep tuning in if you wish. ;D
Bella is pissed! I didn't know she could be so harsh! Still, it's nice to see Edward come back. Just remember, she's too old for him now. ;D
By the way, thanks for reviewing my story, "Giomanapped". Every review counts! Keep tuning in if you wish. ;D
9/27/2008 c2 1D.K. Night24
I LOVE IT! Even though it is sad it is still really really good! Plez post more chapters, I want to read the rest!
I LOVE IT! Even though it is sad it is still really really good! Plez post more chapters, I want to read the rest!
8/10/2008 c2 JMaire
Why is Bella apologizing? They all deserved what she said to them!
Why is Bella apologizing? They all deserved what she said to them!
8/10/2008 c1 6mymarlena
There are many things wrong with this story. first, if Bella faints at blood, why would she work as a nurse? WHy are the vampires in new york? Its too sunny there. Maybe you should rethink this story. Its good, but too many flaws.
There are many things wrong with this story. first, if Bella faints at blood, why would she work as a nurse? WHy are the vampires in new york? Its too sunny there. Maybe you should rethink this story. Its good, but too many flaws.
8/10/2008 c2 3knp10
ARE YOU TRYING TO PISS ME OFF! lol I loved the dating part, and oh! the kissing part was amazing, but stupid bella rejecting him, i could never do that!
ARE YOU TRYING TO PISS ME OFF! lol I loved the dating part, and oh! the kissing part was amazing, but stupid bella rejecting him, i could never do that!
8/9/2008 c1 Rachel Hynder
me want to know what happen! AHH!
me want to know what happen! AHH!
8/9/2008 c1 knp10
OH MY DEANNA! lol I LOVED IT! NOW WRITE MORE! EDWARD AND BELLA HAD BETTER BE 2GETHER! I WOULD DIE IF THEY DIDNT, SO GO WRITE, I STILL THINK YOU SHOULD ADD ME 2 THE STORY, LOL, I COULD BE THE VILLIAN, OF BELLA, NOT THE VAMPIRE, BUT SOME BITCHY COWORKER THAT KEEPS GIVING A HARD TIME, WAT DO YOU THINK?
OH MY DEANNA! lol I LOVED IT! NOW WRITE MORE! EDWARD AND BELLA HAD BETTER BE 2GETHER! I WOULD DIE IF THEY DIDNT, SO GO WRITE, I STILL THINK YOU SHOULD ADD ME 2 THE STORY, LOL, I COULD BE THE VILLIAN, OF BELLA, NOT THE VAMPIRE, BUT SOME BITCHY COWORKER THAT KEEPS GIVING A HARD TIME, WAT DO YOU THINK?