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2/5/2011 c1 savannah
I loved it!:)
12/16/2008 c1 18CharminglyShar
this was ery good actualy except i thought the girl he was with was shar but coninue it plz?
8/27/2008 c1 9porkeepine
I don't really read sex fics - only when my friend who's obsessed with them writes one or recommends a "really good one."

I read this one on my own, though I don't really know why... But I am so impressed. SO impressed. I've never read a oneshot, especially an M-rated one, that was as real as this. You did a really great job.

x sam
8/10/2008 c1 20LimitedByCreativity
...Wowza.

Really, it WAS good! I felt so sorry for Gabby though...which is a first. :S :D

And Troy so head-over-heels with Sharpay.

Really, well done! :)
8/10/2008 c1 66bsloths
That was SO good. Very hot without being gross, which is a fine line to walk when smut is involved. *claps*

I love that you leave the ending open, and we really don't know all the Troypay details. I think you did a great job!
8/10/2008 c1 9troypazash
That was great! I'm glad you decided to do this. It was a great interpretation of the pictures.
8/9/2008 c1 142Stessa
I really liked this.
8/9/2008 c1 20secretcastle
So ascii27 hook you up on that challenge too, did she? Well that makes two of us. I love how you made Troy want Sharpay and think of her even if he's with someone else. I always thought those pictures inspire something sad and your ending captured that. Nice one.
8/9/2008 c1 emily
it was interesting? i guess that is the appropriate word to use.

honestly i hate troypay, but if you did more with this chapter like a short story?, you can make more troyella!

just for me? :D

... okay and other ppl too ;D
8/9/2008 c1 19CanonAntithesis
That was intense! And very, very good. Your descriptive powers were in full swing. Kinda felt sorry for just about everybody in this one, though. Definitely no happy ending for anyone.

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