7/24/2011 c4 16McRose
It's quite well done, but three years is a long time to only be on chapter 4. I'd like to believe you do intend to complete it.
-janlaw
It's quite well done, but three years is a long time to only be on chapter 4. I'd like to believe you do intend to complete it.
-janlaw
7/24/2011 c4 Michi uk
What an unexpected pleasure to see this back on the board today.Hope things haven't been to serious for you.I hope this time Mac tells Harm how she feels. Await next chapter, hopefully soon Can't believe it's over 2yrs since your last chapter.
What an unexpected pleasure to see this back on the board today.Hope things haven't been to serious for you.I hope this time Mac tells Harm how she feels. Await next chapter, hopefully soon Can't believe it's over 2yrs since your last chapter.
1/30/2009 c3 SEAL2
Thank you for coming back to finish this story. Can't wait to see who the shooter is.
My only problem is the lack of quotation marks for dialogue.
Sophie
Thank you for coming back to finish this story. Can't wait to see who the shooter is.
My only problem is the lack of quotation marks for dialogue.
Sophie
1/25/2009 c3 michelle UK
Hope Harm gets better soon, now he seens to be after Mac. Please don't leave us too long with the next chapter, as i hate being left with a cliffie. gr!
Hope Harm gets better soon, now he seens to be after Mac. Please don't leave us too long with the next chapter, as i hate being left with a cliffie. gr!
1/25/2009 c3 Norah
I can't wait for you to continue..! Very intriguing plot, keep up the good work! Love, Norah
I can't wait for you to continue..! Very intriguing plot, keep up the good work! Love, Norah
1/25/2009 c3 Gloria
I like the story. Now, my two main comments:
(1) PLEASE don't be one of those authors who don't finish their stories.
(2) I'm OLD (really, next bd will be 75), so I can't wait long. lol
I like the story. Now, my two main comments:
(1) PLEASE don't be one of those authors who don't finish their stories.
(2) I'm OLD (really, next bd will be 75), so I can't wait long. lol
1/25/2009 c3 gypsyrose06
So happy to see an update for this story! The suspense just continues to grow!
So happy to see an update for this story! The suspense just continues to grow!
9/12/2008 c2 michelle UK
This is very intrigueing,is Palmer going to set Harm Up, or something else, what's the mystery? Can'y wait to find out.
Update ASAP!
This is very intrigueing,is Palmer going to set Harm Up, or something else, what's the mystery? Can'y wait to find out.
Update ASAP!
9/11/2008 c2 8Teacup of JAG
Glad to see more of this. Can't wait to see where you go with the story, but I do hope Harm pulls through okay!
Glad to see more of this. Can't wait to see where you go with the story, but I do hope Harm pulls through okay!