for Remember when it rained9/11/2008 c2 gypsyrose06
So happy you updated. This is a great story. Very suspenseful! Hope you can update soon.
So happy you updated. This is a great story. Very suspenseful! Hope you can update soon.
8/11/2008 c1 gypsyrose06
OH My Gosh! You left us there! Taping foot and fingers waiting for next chappie!
OH My Gosh! You left us there! Taping foot and fingers waiting for next chappie!
8/11/2008 c1 michelle UK
Your so mean fancy leaving me a cliffie i hate cliffhangars.#Hurry and update ASAP
Your so mean fancy leaving me a cliffie i hate cliffhangars.#Hurry and update ASAP
8/10/2008 c1 
8Teacup of JAG
Intriguing beginning! And well done with the imagery. I hope everything works out for our hero. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
8Teacup of JAGIntriguing beginning! And well done with the imagery. I hope everything works out for our hero. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
8/10/2008 c1 3alix33
"Soon a flash of lightning illuminated the city" - I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the fact that you spell the name of that natural phenomenon where white bits of jagged light streak through the sky correctly - do you know how few fic authors spell that word correctly?
"This time it would bee over for real. No way to rebuilt their friendship," - Did you perhaps mean to write: 'it would be over' and 'to rebuild their friendship'?
3alix33"Soon a flash of lightning illuminated the city" - I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the fact that you spell the name of that natural phenomenon where white bits of jagged light streak through the sky correctly - do you know how few fic authors spell that word correctly?
"This time it would bee over for real. No way to rebuilt their friendship," - Did you perhaps mean to write: 'it would be over' and 'to rebuild their friendship'?