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8/24/2008 c4 57D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S
I love this!

I love how you have Tess sweet but still in character!

Great job!
8/23/2008 c4 10Cupid's Arrows
I am so lost, I can't even follow this story line, could you maybe clear things up in the next chapter? I'd really appreciate it.
8/23/2008 c1 Cupid's Arrows
That was good but I think you should use normal writing text. It's also my first time reading a Shane/Tess pairing, and I liked it.
8/23/2008 c4 mrsjjonas13
love it:D

cant wait for the next one

xoxo adri[:
8/16/2008 c1 24have-a-cookie
Taking into consideration that English isn't your first language, I'm congradulating you on your fanfiction! Its got a good plot line, and all the characters are pretty...in character xD

Just don't forget to capitalize your I's in "I" "I'm" or "I've" because I noticed that you haven't done that (sorry...its kind of a pet peeve of mine)

And one last thing, whenever you type tough, I think you're trying to convey the word thought.

That's all I have to say =) you've got a good story line with you. I'd like to see where this goes =)

~Libby~
8/16/2008 c2 mrsjjonas13
loved it again:D

a fight would be REALLY interesting.maybe tess should appologize to Caitlyn first and then when she goes to mitchie, she get's mad at tess because she found out about her and shane. and it would really turn things around if caitlyn defended tess and not mitchie.

but that's just my opinion. whatever you do it cool:]

hope you write more soon

xoxo adri[:
8/10/2008 c1 mrsjjonas13
i absolutely loved this:D

is this a one-shot? because if it isn't, i hope you write more soon

xoxo adri[:

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