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9/7/2015 c6 2DragonLover50
COOL
3/5/2013 c6 8LittleBounce
i really like that they take her in the way they do, and that you show her vulnerability without turning her into a flowerpot. this is hard to achieve (and I don't often achieve it, to be honest).

ok, there are jumps from previous chapters but that's fine. looking forward to the 're-vamp' and will enjoy this as it is (from chapter six onwards) and see what happens!
3/5/2013 c5 LittleBounce
now, if i could've done that at my student halls, my quality of life would've been truly different, lol. I love this! i like the start with the cheeky, unthinking strip, lol, then the demonstration of hte 'magic' which is as normal as ipads to her, but totally out of this world to them. i think you show the contrast really nicely.

and i like the idea that you're setting up - their enemies will be no match for her. not because she's over-qualified or over-powerful or over-shadowing them in any way but simply because she comes from a different place. very cool, and hard to achieve!
3/5/2013 c4 LittleBounce
where do i get the impression that poor cal is just not designed to be patient, however hard he tries? must be really frustrating seeing someone else be caaaaaaaaaaaaalm when your own heart is smacking against the ribs in panic. I love the sight of both worlds in this chapter: her previous and her temporary current.

I think feral needs to come off the caffeine! lol. far too wound up. guy needs a massage, i tell you. or some catnip.

great chapter xxxx
3/1/2013 c3 LittleBounce
i think you've done really well to segue from her cockiness to grief without making it hard to believe. well done - that's really tricky to do. and you manage to get her to explain how the multiple universe thing works without her giving a lecture, which is even harder for her to do!

i liked the mental image of razor and t-bone groaning at the same recollection - that sounds like a rather painful experience!
3/1/2013 c2 LittleBounce
ahhhhhh.. it took me a little while to twig what was going on here with the gender-swap until i appreciated that you were seeing Crystal's appearance from the perspective of someone who'd mistaken her... and I had feline (female) on the brain when reading the name of feral later! re-read now and I get it, lol. Duh - I was being a bit slow, to say the least!

I like callie lots - she has nuts and will not let people walk over her! very protective, too. and can't wait to see more of t-bone. he sounds quite hunky. for a cat!
2/28/2013 c1 LittleBounce
Sely must have had a good deal of satisfaction rubbing salt in the wound with DS: all that evil laughter and gloating from the evil kat only to find that her beloved Cal was one for the yaoi, not the yuri ;)

I've enjoyed this first chapter. I like how Ryu is able to snap him quickly from his panic of not seeing her again. Lost, indeed, is not the same as gone.

Good that Sely has gotten away from DS! looking forward to her reaction, however, on finding that she's not in a reality where she's going to find Cal...
6/15/2009 c4 4Cody Furlong
While this was a nice chapter, I didn't really get the reaction from the male Sk's that I was looking for. It will be interesting to see how Chance and Jake deal with their guest, and how it will affect everyone.
1/4/2009 c3 1ShiningShadow2900
Not Marysue I like the style you are establishing right now. I has everything in the show itself. Pretty cool how you did this, i feel i; right there in the examining room feeling for Crystal. This chapter is great keep up the good work.
1/3/2009 c2 ShiningShadow2900
I like this chapter very cool. You have this situation down to a tee and Crystal like T-bone driving Feral nuts i like it. You did a excellent job on the writing.
1/3/2009 c1 ShiningShadow2900
I like how this story is starting. Very cool you did a very good job on the characters. Cool I can't wait for the next chappie to find out next.
9/8/2008 c3 4Cody Furlong
Interesting,not quite the shock I was expecting with the Swat Kats.But oh well, it was still good and it did,not seem mary sue at all.
8/24/2008 c2 Cody Furlong
Awesome,I bet that is an awkward place to be.I wonder what will happeh when she meets the local Swat Kats?
8/13/2008 c1 Cody Furlong
That is an awesome beginning!Keep it up,I can hardly wait to read what happens next.

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