
7/28/2010 c4 keyking24
wow really good story if u could find time to write more chapters that be great
wow really good story if u could find time to write more chapters that be great
6/10/2009 c1
15PreviouslyTorpe
^^ It's only chapter one and I'm hooked!
I can't wait to read more!
Signed: Daisy

^^ It's only chapter one and I'm hooked!
I can't wait to read more!
Signed: Daisy
12/8/2008 c4
7La Sage Ithere
This is a really great-written story, I can't wait for you to update. Wish you good cheer^^

This is a really great-written story, I can't wait for you to update. Wish you good cheer^^
9/18/2008 c4
29SailorNicoRobin
That was amazing! I was getting all into it...then bam! Oh well, the best moments are usually interuptted ones...I can't wait until next chapter :D

That was amazing! I was getting all into it...then bam! Oh well, the best moments are usually interuptted ones...I can't wait until next chapter :D
9/17/2008 c4
25PencilGirl92
Wow, this is really coming along!
So many touching moments, and Sonic having troubles (I always hate how main characters are so carefree, but you totally changed that!)
Awesome job! Can't wait to read more!

Wow, this is really coming along!
So many touching moments, and Sonic having troubles (I always hate how main characters are so carefree, but you totally changed that!)
Awesome job! Can't wait to read more!
9/16/2008 c4
1Ayayacchi
I'll keept this short. Emotionally powerful, but some clichés and typos. You spelled hedgehog wrong, for instance.

I'll keept this short. Emotionally powerful, but some clichés and typos. You spelled hedgehog wrong, for instance.
8/25/2008 c3
1eakoandcompany
Black wave, i love that one, its so much fun to use on people...and then it gets really annoying when they use it on you...
anyway love the story keep it up cant wait to see what happens.XD

Black wave, i love that one, its so much fun to use on people...and then it gets really annoying when they use it on you...
anyway love the story keep it up cant wait to see what happens.XD