for The Pitfalls of Madness11/13/2016 c14 Guest
Dear god man, plz bring more chapters! Its been a year now!
Dear god man, plz bring more chapters! Its been a year now!
3/28/2015 c14 
2Kiliry
I love you're style, and the way you developed this story. I don't know if it's too late, but it would be nice if you continue or finish this story. It's the best I have ever read so far. _ Anyways, I'm in love with this story, and with the main couple.
2KiliryI love you're style, and the way you developed this story. I don't know if it's too late, but it would be nice if you continue or finish this story. It's the best I have ever read so far. _ Anyways, I'm in love with this story, and with the main couple.
3/11/2014 c14 NibelungValesti
I didn't realize when I reached this chapter,I thought there was still more to well,kind of sad to have find this is unfinished.I hope you feel inspired to go back to this one day and give us more well-written and awesome chapters like the ones till now.
I can't say I'm a Cass/Raph shipper,I tried this out of mere curiosity but I like how it turned out.I also didn't see the twists coming which was pretty delightful and kept this very interesting.I meantioned it before that this is well written and it truly nice to see it.
This is perhaps my first SC fanfic,but I'm sure yours is one of the best for certain.
I hope you're well and the reason you haven't written more is due to real life,work and busy schedule(or lack of inspiration).
I didn't realize when I reached this chapter,I thought there was still more to well,kind of sad to have find this is unfinished.I hope you feel inspired to go back to this one day and give us more well-written and awesome chapters like the ones till now.
I can't say I'm a Cass/Raph shipper,I tried this out of mere curiosity but I like how it turned out.I also didn't see the twists coming which was pretty delightful and kept this very interesting.I meantioned it before that this is well written and it truly nice to see it.
This is perhaps my first SC fanfic,but I'm sure yours is one of the best for certain.
I hope you're well and the reason you haven't written more is due to real life,work and busy schedule(or lack of inspiration).
2/2/2014 c14 1DaOneInDaCorner520
Eghhhhh, five years is a bit much don't you think? I truly love the story and I hope eventually you'll come back to it.
1DaOneInDaCorner520Eghhhhh, five years is a bit much don't you think? I truly love the story and I hope eventually you'll come back to it.
12/4/2011 c14 EnemyLove
This story is amazing and more than wonderfully written. It saddens me that it's been two whole years since you updated, but if you've been working on chapter 15 during all that time - it's going to be...orgasmic! Hehe :)
I haven't found myself to be interested in Raphael/Cassandra until recently. Good thing your story was the first one I clicked when I searched for that paring's fanfiction, cause now I'm hooked! You have ALL the characters personalities played out PERFECTLY, and even through Cassandra's dark transformation you managed to keep her spunky attitude in tact. And, needless to say, Raphael's dominance was never lost, you should be VERY proud of that, as well as Anysia.
Even though it's been a long while since you updated...I have faith that you'll keep going. I think you know that this story is way too good to just abandon it.
Ah, the wait is gonna kill me though!
This story is amazing and more than wonderfully written. It saddens me that it's been two whole years since you updated, but if you've been working on chapter 15 during all that time - it's going to be...orgasmic! Hehe :)
I haven't found myself to be interested in Raphael/Cassandra until recently. Good thing your story was the first one I clicked when I searched for that paring's fanfiction, cause now I'm hooked! You have ALL the characters personalities played out PERFECTLY, and even through Cassandra's dark transformation you managed to keep her spunky attitude in tact. And, needless to say, Raphael's dominance was never lost, you should be VERY proud of that, as well as Anysia.
Even though it's been a long while since you updated...I have faith that you'll keep going. I think you know that this story is way too good to just abandon it.
Ah, the wait is gonna kill me though!
6/13/2011 c14 Alexiel27
I'm going to say this thing only in a few words, because i don't trust my connection (i wrote a VERY long review two days ago, but if you can't see it you can imagine what happened): your story is beautiful. Really, it's scary and horrible and i couldn't sleep the night i read it. Is always terrible to see the ruination of a person, real or not; above all if an author has the ability to write a good dark fic, and not so many writers can do it. Your Cassandra is IC, and even in a dark version she is still lovable and "too much alive", as Amy said in chapter 11, if i dont' mistake.
As for your Raphael, only one word: wonderful. Often we forget in the Soul game that after all he is a monster, even if handsome and charming.
Why don't you continue the story? it's a pity that one of the best fanfiction i've ever read is not finished .Honestly, i'm frustated because not knowing how it ends, so many questions are open: will they finally fall in love each other? This one above all. Will ever Amy accept Cassandra? And what will happen if Raphael meets Sophitia? :3 I have my own theories, and i want to see if i'm right with a new chapter :). Sorry for the not so few words, but i couldn't resist. Bye!
I'm going to say this thing only in a few words, because i don't trust my connection (i wrote a VERY long review two days ago, but if you can't see it you can imagine what happened): your story is beautiful. Really, it's scary and horrible and i couldn't sleep the night i read it. Is always terrible to see the ruination of a person, real or not; above all if an author has the ability to write a good dark fic, and not so many writers can do it. Your Cassandra is IC, and even in a dark version she is still lovable and "too much alive", as Amy said in chapter 11, if i dont' mistake.
As for your Raphael, only one word: wonderful. Often we forget in the Soul game that after all he is a monster, even if handsome and charming.
Why don't you continue the story? it's a pity that one of the best fanfiction i've ever read is not finished .Honestly, i'm frustated because not knowing how it ends, so many questions are open: will they finally fall in love each other? This one above all. Will ever Amy accept Cassandra? And what will happen if Raphael meets Sophitia? :3 I have my own theories, and i want to see if i'm right with a new chapter :). Sorry for the not so few words, but i couldn't resist. Bye!
3/24/2011 c9 3mdgc1973
OMG! Chapter 9 (lost for words) GO RAPHAEL! Why it couldn't have been me? Damn Cassandra. I don't know about the biting part but everything else was good. You did your thing!
3mdgc1973OMG! Chapter 9 (lost for words) GO RAPHAEL! Why it couldn't have been me? Damn Cassandra. I don't know about the biting part but everything else was good. You did your thing!
2/7/2011 c14 10TheFairySylvia
I love this story. Absolutely riveting. Please update soon! I'm literally DYING to know what happens next! It's getting very suspenseful!
10TheFairySylviaI love this story. Absolutely riveting. Please update soon! I'm literally DYING to know what happens next! It's getting very suspenseful!
1/9/2011 c1 12The black Silhouette Angel
WOW! It just made me want to read the rest from the begining. Good job!
12The black Silhouette AngelWOW! It just made me want to read the rest from the begining. Good job!
12/25/2010 c14 7Cloud Raithwall
Oh. My. God. This story is so awesome! I love Soul Calibur and all of the characters and their own twisted ways. I have to say Raphael is one of my faves next to Nightmare and Yun-Seong. I plan on writing my own Soul Calibur fanfic about Raphael, only him and my OC, and this has really helped in inspiring me to begin. Unfortunately, I have 3 other fanfics i am currently working on, lol. Anywho, I noticed that you havent updated in over a year and I really hope you continue this story. I love it and I can't believe how much it has me hooked. If you do, I can't wait for the next chapter! XD
7Cloud RaithwallOh. My. God. This story is so awesome! I love Soul Calibur and all of the characters and their own twisted ways. I have to say Raphael is one of my faves next to Nightmare and Yun-Seong. I plan on writing my own Soul Calibur fanfic about Raphael, only him and my OC, and this has really helped in inspiring me to begin. Unfortunately, I have 3 other fanfics i am currently working on, lol. Anywho, I noticed that you havent updated in over a year and I really hope you continue this story. I love it and I can't believe how much it has me hooked. If you do, I can't wait for the next chapter! XD
11/28/2010 c14 16Ms. Kreatopita
I just had a two hour reading spree and DAMN! I love this fic! I wasn't a big fan of Raph/Cass to begin with, but I can safely say that I have been converted! And to think this all started with remembering "Oh, November 27 is Raphael's birthday!" and then searching for pics and stumbling upon the one you posted on deviantArt. Keep up the great work!
16Ms. KreatopitaI just had a two hour reading spree and DAMN! I love this fic! I wasn't a big fan of Raph/Cass to begin with, but I can safely say that I have been converted! And to think this all started with remembering "Oh, November 27 is Raphael's birthday!" and then searching for pics and stumbling upon the one you posted on deviantArt. Keep up the great work!
1/14/2010 c14 30field innocence
(stretching from the long reading than yawns)
Finally! I'm done. This certainly is the best chapter from all the others. Suddenly Tira became my favorite evil character villain in SC (even though I never play her in the game, but I like her). From my last review, until now, I am right. You are the best. You're better than my favorite authors on my list. Actually, your the only author who's putting her soul into this story and is committed. I've read those that I thought were committed but disappointed me, but you didn't. You surprise me! You have skill girl, great skill (including Anysia)
I see Cassandra and Raphael as a perfect dark couple. I like Cassandra's stubbornness and uncontrollable urges that make her seem crazy with power hehehe. Raphael is a sharp, serious and calm person that make him seem so desirable and rich. The man is irritable (^_^) Amy is a cute and caring little girl, even though she hates Cassandra for getting more attention from her father, I still like the girl. From her facial expression in the game, it's hard to tell if the girl is evil or not. So it work either way with me, don't mind if she is evil or not.
Also, I've read the story that inspired your work, 'In his Image' was it? Love it, great and quick.
I know it takes more than weeks to complete one chapter (been there-_-), so I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. I can't wait! In the meantime, I'll probably be reading other Cassandra fic. Until than, love and hugs.
~Field of Innocence
30field innocence(stretching from the long reading than yawns)
Finally! I'm done. This certainly is the best chapter from all the others. Suddenly Tira became my favorite evil character villain in SC (even though I never play her in the game, but I like her). From my last review, until now, I am right. You are the best. You're better than my favorite authors on my list. Actually, your the only author who's putting her soul into this story and is committed. I've read those that I thought were committed but disappointed me, but you didn't. You surprise me! You have skill girl, great skill (including Anysia)
I see Cassandra and Raphael as a perfect dark couple. I like Cassandra's stubbornness and uncontrollable urges that make her seem crazy with power hehehe. Raphael is a sharp, serious and calm person that make him seem so desirable and rich. The man is irritable (^_^) Amy is a cute and caring little girl, even though she hates Cassandra for getting more attention from her father, I still like the girl. From her facial expression in the game, it's hard to tell if the girl is evil or not. So it work either way with me, don't mind if she is evil or not.
Also, I've read the story that inspired your work, 'In his Image' was it? Love it, great and quick.
I know it takes more than weeks to complete one chapter (been there-_-), so I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. I can't wait! In the meantime, I'll probably be reading other Cassandra fic. Until than, love and hugs.
~Field of Innocence