Reviews: Lily of the Valley

for Lily of the Valley

8/10/2010 c14

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NICE CHAPTER!

8/10/2010 c13 waterfairy12345
haha nice...

8/9/2010 c12 waterfairy12345
nice...Tachibana

8/9/2010 c11 waterfairy12345
hm...i like it! hehe!

8/8/2010 c10 waterfairy12345
hehe awesome chapter!

8/7/2010 c9 waterfairy12345
wa! I like the Marui x Kaori x Yukimura

8/7/2010 c8 waterfairy12345
wa! Poor Marui!

8/5/2010 c7 waterfairy12345
wa! hehe! nice chappy!

8/4/2010 c6 waterfairy12345
hehe!

8/4/2010 c5 waterfairy12345
hehe! yukimura!

8/4/2010 c4 waterfairy12345
hehe! go marui!

8/4/2010 c3 waterfairy12345
hehe...finally they see each other..ish

8/4/2010 c2 waterfairy12345
hehe! chappy 2 was good 2! dreaming abt each other...^_^

8/4/2010 c1 waterfairy12345
I like it!

7/2/2010 c4 Guest
It's a great story so far, but be careful with your verb tenses! You seem to be switching on and off with past tense and present tense; just choose one and stick with it. Other than that, I love the plot and it's really funny :)

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