for Casino Nightmares8/20/2008 c6 
5bingbangboom714
Yeah! All cheer for the JAM twins! I loved it! Very sweet to make up for the angst even though I liked it to. Great job! Update soon!
5bingbangboom714Yeah! All cheer for the JAM twins! I loved it! Very sweet to make up for the angst even though I liked it to. Great job! Update soon!
8/20/2008 c6 19JAMonMyToast
Yay! Twins! I sure wasn't expecting that, but I still love imagining Jim and Pam with twins. That part made me smile.
19JAMonMyToastYay! Twins! I sure wasn't expecting that, but I still love imagining Jim and Pam with twins. That part made me smile.
8/20/2008 c5 Elly10
This was a good chapter but the only problem I had was the grammatical person shift in the middle of the story. You switched from 3rd to 1st person and it confused me a little. But other than that, it was a good chapter. :)
This was a good chapter but the only problem I had was the grammatical person shift in the middle of the story. You switched from 3rd to 1st person and it confused me a little. But other than that, it was a good chapter. :)
8/20/2008 c5 5bingbangboom714
I loved it! It was exactlly as good as I hoped it would be! Your welcome by the way, thanks though for making this great. Update soon!
5bingbangboom714I loved it! It was exactlly as good as I hoped it would be! Your welcome by the way, thanks though for making this great. Update soon!
8/20/2008 c4 13toolezbionic
I think that maybe Michael should have something to do with Roy finding out. With the way you wrote this chapter it would set that up nicely since Michael just found out and they all work at Dunder Mifflin. Anyway, great new chapter! I can't wait to see what you come up with!
13toolezbionicI think that maybe Michael should have something to do with Roy finding out. With the way you wrote this chapter it would set that up nicely since Michael just found out and they all work at Dunder Mifflin. Anyway, great new chapter! I can't wait to see what you come up with!
8/19/2008 c4 5bingbangboom714
I loved it! I was really hoping Michael was the one to discover them. As for the Roy situation, maybe it could be at Poor Richards after work that way, Jim isn`t talking to them but is watching them. My idea is sort of like in season 3 with the episode Cocktails. Another idea could be in the parking lot, Pam could pretend to have extra things to do and Jim waits in his car while they talk so if anything happens he can save her. If you want them both to talk to Roy then I think you should have it in the break room for more comedy because in my mind if they talk all together in the office Michael will include himself and that is a really funny thought. I wrote a lot. Update soon! Great job!
5bingbangboom714I loved it! I was really hoping Michael was the one to discover them. As for the Roy situation, maybe it could be at Poor Richards after work that way, Jim isn`t talking to them but is watching them. My idea is sort of like in season 3 with the episode Cocktails. Another idea could be in the parking lot, Pam could pretend to have extra things to do and Jim waits in his car while they talk so if anything happens he can save her. If you want them both to talk to Roy then I think you should have it in the break room for more comedy because in my mind if they talk all together in the office Michael will include himself and that is a really funny thought. I wrote a lot. Update soon! Great job!
8/19/2008 c3 13toolezbionic
Yay! Another chapter so soon! You are on a wonderful fanfiction roll! So far each chapter has been as good as the last. keep it up!
13toolezbionicYay! Another chapter so soon! You are on a wonderful fanfiction roll! So far each chapter has been as good as the last. keep it up!
8/19/2008 c3 5bingbangboom714
I love it! You are definatley doing a good job at making this fanfiction unlike the others. You should have the next chapter have the coworkers react and Roy angry to. Update soon!
5bingbangboom714I love it! You are definatley doing a good job at making this fanfiction unlike the others. You should have the next chapter have the coworkers react and Roy angry to. Update soon!
8/19/2008 c2 13toolezbionic
Great update. I loved how you described Pam's emotions during this time. I really liked the whole haunted eyes thing. that is definitely something you don't usually see in an office fanfiction and it worked really well. Update again soon!
13toolezbionicGreat update. I loved how you described Pam's emotions during this time. I really liked the whole haunted eyes thing. that is definitely something you don't usually see in an office fanfiction and it worked really well. Update again soon!
8/19/2008 c2 loopy loops
aww this story is so good i cant wait to read more when you update...great job!
aww this story is so good i cant wait to read more when you update...great job!