for Casino Nightmares8/19/2008 c2 
5bingbangboom714
I loved it! Update soon! I liked how Michael was sensitive at the end of the day.
5bingbangboom714I loved it! Update soon! I liked how Michael was sensitive at the end of the day.
8/18/2008 c1 13toolezbionic
This story is written a lot differently then many other office fanfiction I have read and it is nice to have a change of pace. It is very well written so far (especially for a first chapter). I hope to see more soon.
13toolezbionicThis story is written a lot differently then many other office fanfiction I have read and it is nice to have a change of pace. It is very well written so far (especially for a first chapter). I hope to see more soon.
8/18/2008 c1 Inactivekj562
Hmm this Looks interesting...
BTW the correct spelling of Pam's last name is spelt BESSLY not BEASLeY
Hmm this Looks interesting...
BTW the correct spelling of Pam's last name is spelt BESSLY not BEASLeY
8/18/2008 c1 19JAMonMyToast
You told their feelings well, describing the kiss perfectly. I also love the angst in this chapter. Great job!
19JAMonMyToastYou told their feelings well, describing the kiss perfectly. I also love the angst in this chapter. Great job!