for The Fox Knight10/14/2022 c4 jlhicks49
Naruto is like Inuyasha, he may not look like a man, but he has the heart of a man
Naruto is like Inuyasha, he may not look like a man, but he has the heart of a man
6/13/2022 c5 cs1122334455
Danzo was removed as an elder by the 3rd hokage after do you uchiha clan massacre
Danzo was removed as an elder by the 3rd hokage after do you uchiha clan massacre
4/27/2022 c18 Zeke Hooper
cool story.
cool story.
4/27/2022 c1 Zeke Hooper
interesting story so far.
interesting story so far.
11/22/2021 c2 
4iacopo.passerini
Bene una storia interresante e complessa!
un Naruto coraggioso e abile!
Spero che Sasuke muoia!
4iacopo.passeriniBene una storia interresante e complessa!
un Naruto coraggioso e abile!
Spero che Sasuke muoia!
10/12/2021 c1 Bluewarrior3
Hmmm I hope Hinata isn't going to be crying through this whole story, it's annoying and I love Hinata but she wasn't always crying in the anime from when I remember. There's some fanfics that I've read and they just have her always crying! Naruto falls Hinata cries, Naruto leaves for a mission Hinata cries, Naruto has a small fever Hinata cries! Please! I hope it's not like that, she's a ninja I'm sure she's been through alot, she has to have faith in Naruto
Hmmm I hope Hinata isn't going to be crying through this whole story, it's annoying and I love Hinata but she wasn't always crying in the anime from when I remember. There's some fanfics that I've read and they just have her always crying! Naruto falls Hinata cries, Naruto leaves for a mission Hinata cries, Naruto has a small fever Hinata cries! Please! I hope it's not like that, she's a ninja I'm sure she's been through alot, she has to have faith in Naruto
6/28/2021 c1 HyperA2019
I am looking to chapter 19 and I vote for this to be changed to the rating M.
I am looking to chapter 19 and I vote for this to be changed to the rating M.
4/10/2021 c3 Guest
So for SOME REASON, tsunade pulls ALMOST HER ENTIRE work force off the job.. To catch a guy that is ESSENTIALLY "helping" the village?.. How does that make sense? EVEN OROCHIMARU doesn't get that kind of attention! I think you've got the characters' priorities kinda messed up.
So for SOME REASON, tsunade pulls ALMOST HER ENTIRE work force off the job.. To catch a guy that is ESSENTIALLY "helping" the village?.. How does that make sense? EVEN OROCHIMARU doesn't get that kind of attention! I think you've got the characters' priorities kinda messed up.
4/10/2021 c2 Guest
The uchiha ISN'T emo... He's BRAIN DAMAGED... SEVERELY... Part of it from itachi's genjutsu... But more then that, just his own genetics.. he's BUSTED.. BORN BROKEN, WAAAAYYYY to much inbreeding.. Add the two together.. and well, you can see, this shit-stain never should have even been allowed to graduate. Heck, he SHOULD have been killed in the hospital after being found when itachi was done with him. At the VERY LEAST, he should have been given to danzo for root (and yes I realize he's the one that gave the kill order... ALL THE MORE REASON to give him to danzo regardless of what was told to itachi).
It's stupid that killing other nins is SUPPOSEDLY bringing anger on him... I mean, NINJAS ARE ASSASSINS.. That's KINDA THEIR JOB DESCRIPTION. If their people got killed? THEY WEREN'T GOOD ENOUGH... Plain and simple.
The uchiha ISN'T emo... He's BRAIN DAMAGED... SEVERELY... Part of it from itachi's genjutsu... But more then that, just his own genetics.. he's BUSTED.. BORN BROKEN, WAAAAYYYY to much inbreeding.. Add the two together.. and well, you can see, this shit-stain never should have even been allowed to graduate. Heck, he SHOULD have been killed in the hospital after being found when itachi was done with him. At the VERY LEAST, he should have been given to danzo for root (and yes I realize he's the one that gave the kill order... ALL THE MORE REASON to give him to danzo regardless of what was told to itachi).
It's stupid that killing other nins is SUPPOSEDLY bringing anger on him... I mean, NINJAS ARE ASSASSINS.. That's KINDA THEIR JOB DESCRIPTION. If their people got killed? THEY WEREN'T GOOD ENOUGH... Plain and simple.
4/10/2021 c2 Guest
The uchiha ISN'T emo... He's BRAIN DAMAGED... SEVERELY... Part of it from itachi's genjutsu... But more then that, just his own genetics.. he's BUSTED.. BORN BROKEN, WAAAAYYYY to much inbreeding.. Add the two together.. and well, you can see, this shit-stain never should have even been allowed to graduate. Heck, he SHOULD have been killed in the hospital after being found when itachi was done with him. At the VERY LEAST, he should have been given to danzo for root (and yes I realize he's the one that gave the kill order... ALL THE MORE REASON to give him to danzo regardless of what was told to itachi).
The uchiha ISN'T emo... He's BRAIN DAMAGED... SEVERELY... Part of it from itachi's genjutsu... But more then that, just his own genetics.. he's BUSTED.. BORN BROKEN, WAAAAYYYY to much inbreeding.. Add the two together.. and well, you can see, this shit-stain never should have even been allowed to graduate. Heck, he SHOULD have been killed in the hospital after being found when itachi was done with him. At the VERY LEAST, he should have been given to danzo for root (and yes I realize he's the one that gave the kill order... ALL THE MORE REASON to give him to danzo regardless of what was told to itachi).
4/10/2021 c1 Guest
I dunno why authors have tsunade even PUT UP with Jiraiya's behavior.. I KNOW it was SUPPOSED to be for humor in the original series.. But the anime community doesn't REALLY get western HUMOR (as in the toad ISN'T FUNNY) take away the humor aspect, and he's KINDA A PATHETIC, LAME JOKE... He SUCKS NUTS at being a "spymaster" (seriously, he's TERRIBLE) as a ninja he's ALRIGHT, but his past ENTIRELY CONSUMES HIM, which he shouldn't ALLOW (considering he WILL teach the new "god of their world" eventually).. He thought it was nageto?... He was wrong, he thought it was minato... BUZZ WRONG AGAIN... but since the prophecy hasn't changed... HE STILL WILL.. So he needs to get his head outta his ass. Just put a seal on the idiot, or RIP OFF HIS MANHOOD (that one seems the easiest)... and just be DONE with this running gag, that NOBODY LAUGHS AT.
Orochimaru and pein are the villians that irritate me the most... Orochimaru.. because there is SO MUCH POTENTIAL there... But it's all wasted on the author's mary-sue... His basic dream "to learn all the jutsu of the world".. It's great.. TOTALLY UNATTAINABLE (since new ones can be created all the time, and ancient ones die with their wielders).. but still powerful enough and INSANE enough to make a REALLY GOOD "bad guy"... and then it's pissed away... Pein has the EYES OF GOD and the bloodline to provide him with the chakra to BACK IT UP... THEN IS CRIPPLED BEFORE THE STORY STARTS... and somehow falls under dominion of an INFERIOR clan (uchiha)... MAKES NO SENSE.. What a waste again. Every "good" villain of the series is squandered... Look at Mōryō a LITERAL FRICKIN' DEMON.. Wouldn't that have been better for a BIG BAD then some stupid uchiha that can't get their head outta their ass?
I dunno why authors have tsunade even PUT UP with Jiraiya's behavior.. I KNOW it was SUPPOSED to be for humor in the original series.. But the anime community doesn't REALLY get western HUMOR (as in the toad ISN'T FUNNY) take away the humor aspect, and he's KINDA A PATHETIC, LAME JOKE... He SUCKS NUTS at being a "spymaster" (seriously, he's TERRIBLE) as a ninja he's ALRIGHT, but his past ENTIRELY CONSUMES HIM, which he shouldn't ALLOW (considering he WILL teach the new "god of their world" eventually).. He thought it was nageto?... He was wrong, he thought it was minato... BUZZ WRONG AGAIN... but since the prophecy hasn't changed... HE STILL WILL.. So he needs to get his head outta his ass. Just put a seal on the idiot, or RIP OFF HIS MANHOOD (that one seems the easiest)... and just be DONE with this running gag, that NOBODY LAUGHS AT.
Orochimaru and pein are the villians that irritate me the most... Orochimaru.. because there is SO MUCH POTENTIAL there... But it's all wasted on the author's mary-sue... His basic dream "to learn all the jutsu of the world".. It's great.. TOTALLY UNATTAINABLE (since new ones can be created all the time, and ancient ones die with their wielders).. but still powerful enough and INSANE enough to make a REALLY GOOD "bad guy"... and then it's pissed away... Pein has the EYES OF GOD and the bloodline to provide him with the chakra to BACK IT UP... THEN IS CRIPPLED BEFORE THE STORY STARTS... and somehow falls under dominion of an INFERIOR clan (uchiha)... MAKES NO SENSE.. What a waste again. Every "good" villain of the series is squandered... Look at Mōryō a LITERAL FRICKIN' DEMON.. Wouldn't that have been better for a BIG BAD then some stupid uchiha that can't get their head outta their ass?
4/9/2021 c1 10Wolfone10
It amazes me how many authors cannot LET GO of the whole IWA thing... THEY ARE NOT A THREAT, they HAVE NEVER BEEN A THREAT in ALL of the naruto SERIES! They got SPANKED HARD in the third war and were BROKEN! FINISHED, KAPUT... HISTORY... Before naruto was ever even BORN! Only in here in fanfiction do they EVER pop up again! Sound and Rain are the problems now! (and konoha CREATED both problems! So really, every problem they are having? ARE THEIR OWN FAULTS!)
10Wolfone10It amazes me how many authors cannot LET GO of the whole IWA thing... THEY ARE NOT A THREAT, they HAVE NEVER BEEN A THREAT in ALL of the naruto SERIES! They got SPANKED HARD in the third war and were BROKEN! FINISHED, KAPUT... HISTORY... Before naruto was ever even BORN! Only in here in fanfiction do they EVER pop up again! Sound and Rain are the problems now! (and konoha CREATED both problems! So really, every problem they are having? ARE THEIR OWN FAULTS!)
10/21/2020 c18 4camilaflordeloto
I enjoyed this fic too. I came right after I finished Rebirth of Legends and it was worth it as well!
4camilaflordelotoI enjoyed this fic too. I came right after I finished Rebirth of Legends and it was worth it as well!
8/25/2020 c13 Dracoessa Draga
that "bomb" did fucking trigger me, those three (the eldersdanzo) should be keelhauledquartered.
that "bomb" did fucking trigger me, those three (the eldersdanzo) should be keelhauledquartered.