
5/21/2016 c13 davidahare
I hope the author is well. I am also hoping that this story will be updated and finished. I have enjoyed what has been post so far.
I hope the author is well. I am also hoping that this story will be updated and finished. I have enjoyed what has been post so far.
12/29/2009 c13
7RawrMeansILoveYouInDino
how could flames be welcome? THIS IS AMAZING! A little unexpected at places, sure, but amazing still :) great job!

how could flames be welcome? THIS IS AMAZING! A little unexpected at places, sure, but amazing still :) great job!
12/29/2009 c7 RawrMeansILoveYouInDino
Is Charlie now one of the funniest characters? yes I LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S AMAZING!
Is Charlie now one of the funniest characters? yes I LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S AMAZING!
11/12/2009 c12
4Mew-Mew-Fan08
As soon as I read what Emmett said I got all goosebumpy. Good cliffheanger. But please don't leave us in the dark for long.
Update soon!

As soon as I read what Emmett said I got all goosebumpy. Good cliffheanger. But please don't leave us in the dark for long.
Update soon!
10/13/2009 c11 Mew-Mew-Fan08
Now that Bella is awake and a vampire, back to the main plot!
Update soon!
Now that Bella is awake and a vampire, back to the main plot!
Update soon!
10/12/2009 c10
10Procrastinator123
I WILL! i am an official beta - i haven't set up my page yet, my grammar is awful and i can't spell to save my life but i'd love to beta. That is, unless someone else hasn't already offered. Please get back to me asap! Thankyou!

I WILL! i am an official beta - i haven't set up my page yet, my grammar is awful and i can't spell to save my life but i'd love to beta. That is, unless someone else hasn't already offered. Please get back to me asap! Thankyou!
10/5/2009 c10
4So Wrong It's Amber
Really good chapter!
You're looking for a beta? i can help (:
I have this thing where all grammar and punctuation has to be perfect :L
Also, don't know if you've already thought of this, you may not want to do it, but maybe after all this fight bit's been cleared, maybe they could find out that Stephanie Meyer is not actually dead, just in hiding, or something, and she actually has future-telling powers, like Alice, and see's what's going to happen in Breaking Dawn, so writes it. Meanwhile, Edward and Bella have got married and are in Isle Esme, and when they get back everyone knows whats happened!
Just a thought ;)
Get back to mee
xx

Really good chapter!
You're looking for a beta? i can help (:
I have this thing where all grammar and punctuation has to be perfect :L
Also, don't know if you've already thought of this, you may not want to do it, but maybe after all this fight bit's been cleared, maybe they could find out that Stephanie Meyer is not actually dead, just in hiding, or something, and she actually has future-telling powers, like Alice, and see's what's going to happen in Breaking Dawn, so writes it. Meanwhile, Edward and Bella have got married and are in Isle Esme, and when they get back everyone knows whats happened!
Just a thought ;)
Get back to mee
xx
10/4/2009 c10
2blackangel150
no ni no jasper cant die he cant die no please dont kill jasper please please bring him back say he went to limbo and that he will come back. how could you kill jasper alice needs him and the family needs to know bellas feeling now that she is a newborn you killed one of my favorites characters please im begging you please bring back jasper please im literally in tears im so crushed jasper shouldnt have died

no ni no jasper cant die he cant die no please dont kill jasper please please bring him back say he went to limbo and that he will come back. how could you kill jasper alice needs him and the family needs to know bellas feeling now that she is a newborn you killed one of my favorites characters please im begging you please bring back jasper please im literally in tears im so crushed jasper shouldnt have died
10/4/2009 c10
3Onepersoncanmakeadifference
I love your Story please dont stop now?
Ur looking for a beta I could help.
I agree that its really mean that the other storys make Emmett seem dumb, hes not. hahaha can u make Mike still like Bella? And he convinses Bella to change him then he and Edward get in a fight to the death over Bella but Edward takes mercy on Mike before he kills him (coz Edward wins of coarse!)
So Edward makes him promise to stay far away from Bella, Mikes 'power' could be that he can't break his promises! Tell me if you like the idea, my name is TheNewestCullen95
Please tell me if youlike my idea or not!

I love your Story please dont stop now?
Ur looking for a beta I could help.
I agree that its really mean that the other storys make Emmett seem dumb, hes not. hahaha can u make Mike still like Bella? And he convinses Bella to change him then he and Edward get in a fight to the death over Bella but Edward takes mercy on Mike before he kills him (coz Edward wins of coarse!)
So Edward makes him promise to stay far away from Bella, Mikes 'power' could be that he can't break his promises! Tell me if you like the idea, my name is TheNewestCullen95
Please tell me if youlike my idea or not!
10/3/2009 c10
4Mew-Mew-Fan08
I'm glad we finally got a chapter out of you. =] Excited to see what happens next.
Update soon!

I'm glad we finally got a chapter out of you. =] Excited to see what happens next.
Update soon!