for An Octopus shaped Revenge9/21/2008 c1 
32Azamiko
Hahah, most of that makes me rather ill...I can't eat bento, no matter how cute it might be. I think I was able to stomach the egg and some rice...
32AzamikoHahah, most of that makes me rather ill...I can't eat bento, no matter how cute it might be. I think I was able to stomach the egg and some rice...
9/6/2008 c1 Yukino-chan
woah! i wan 1 too!
woah! i wan 1 too!
8/28/2008 c1 25TheLadyPendragon
XDD Doumeki got someone even BETTER than a girl to make him a bento. This is beyond cute. It just makes me aw. Watanuki is the best cook(and apparently artist)ever.
25TheLadyPendragonXDD Doumeki got someone even BETTER than a girl to make him a bento. This is beyond cute. It just makes me aw. Watanuki is the best cook(and apparently artist)ever.
8/24/2008 c1 2Lonewolfe001
That was so sweet. I did google "cute bento', its amazing. I hope Doumeki will repay Watanuki in kind. LOL. Happy writing
2Lonewolfe001That was so sweet. I did google "cute bento', its amazing. I hope Doumeki will repay Watanuki in kind. LOL. Happy writing
8/24/2008 c1 nightmarewings
I think i love you. I loved this it's so funny and I could really see this happening. Though I wonder how his classmates would feel if they found out the bento wasn't made by a girl...would he be downgraded from personal hero? But then again at least he got a super cute bento from some one who wasn't his mom, right? Haha, I can just hear Watanuki's cry of pain when he finds out his plan didn't work. haha ^_^;
I think i love you. I loved this it's so funny and I could really see this happening. Though I wonder how his classmates would feel if they found out the bento wasn't made by a girl...would he be downgraded from personal hero? But then again at least he got a super cute bento from some one who wasn't his mom, right? Haha, I can just hear Watanuki's cry of pain when he finds out his plan didn't work. haha ^_^;
8/24/2008 c1 26Tuli-Susi
I really liked this fic, and probably the best part about it is that I could SO see this happening!
26Tuli-SusiI really liked this fic, and probably the best part about it is that I could SO see this happening!
8/22/2008 c1 DuosAngel
Very rarely do I smile from the begining to the end of a fanfic, but this time I just couldn't get the grin off my face. This is the kind of fic that makes me want to jump up and down screaming 'more more more!'
In short, you did a great job and I loved it.
Very rarely do I smile from the begining to the end of a fanfic, but this time I just couldn't get the grin off my face. This is the kind of fic that makes me want to jump up and down screaming 'more more more!'
In short, you did a great job and I loved it.
8/22/2008 c1 nymnym
OMG! This is so perfect! Doumeki and the bento! I'm speechless. This was very well written, and I enjoyed this story very much!
OMG! This is so perfect! Doumeki and the bento! I'm speechless. This was very well written, and I enjoyed this story very much!
8/21/2008 c1 1CCSRonin
I really liked this story alot. It was cute, funny and totally fit Doumeki's personality. It also fit watanuki's personality to do something like this and have it backfire. I would have Watanuki's luck not doumeki's. Keep up the writing.
1CCSRoninI really liked this story alot. It was cute, funny and totally fit Doumeki's personality. It also fit watanuki's personality to do something like this and have it backfire. I would have Watanuki's luck not doumeki's. Keep up the writing.
8/21/2008 c1 7flordesombra
XD XD XD XD
so funny! You did a great job writing Doumeki's POV.
Doumeki, you sly dog...
Note: my japanese teacher told me that in Japan mothers have competitions to see who can make the cutest bento. It's almost a bento-battle!
I insist: lol
7flordesombraXD XD XD XD
so funny! You did a great job writing Doumeki's POV.
Doumeki, you sly dog...
Note: my japanese teacher told me that in Japan mothers have competitions to see who can make the cutest bento. It's almost a bento-battle!
I insist: lol
8/20/2008 c1 13galliechan
This was totally great! I think you reflected their characters just right. Watanuki's revenge was just so Watanuki and Doumeki's expectataions from his bento was hillarious. I can imagine Watanuki's evil chuckles while preparing that bento :)
13galliechanThis was totally great! I think you reflected their characters just right. Watanuki's revenge was just so Watanuki and Doumeki's expectataions from his bento was hillarious. I can imagine Watanuki's evil chuckles while preparing that bento :)
8/20/2008 c1 19severus-fan
I'm hungry! XD
I was just wondering when we'd get another wonderful fic from you, so I was really excited when I saw the alert in my inbox.
Poor Watanuki, nothing ever goes right for him, does it? Not that Doumeki minds. I wonder what the guys would say if they knew the super!cute bento was made by a guy...I loved the imagine of Watanuki showing up at the shrine in the morning cackling. It made me chuckle.
19severus-fanI'm hungry! XD
I was just wondering when we'd get another wonderful fic from you, so I was really excited when I saw the alert in my inbox.
Poor Watanuki, nothing ever goes right for him, does it? Not that Doumeki minds. I wonder what the guys would say if they knew the super!cute bento was made by a guy...I loved the imagine of Watanuki showing up at the shrine in the morning cackling. It made me chuckle.