11/3/2013 c4 Reading Cat
I'm guessing you abandoned this? Shoot, I really liked it, too.
I'm guessing you abandoned this? Shoot, I really liked it, too.
10/23/2009 c4 7Patchworkcrows
This is freakin' amazing. I love Mikala, she's hillarious. Yay for Death Mountain and Mikala leading them all over the damn globe. ^-^
Poor Vaati got his ass kicked by the two of them in chapter 1. I was laughing my ass off during that chapter.
The whole scene with the boy asking those questions reminded me of an oneshot I read called "Why Mr. Purple Man" which probably ripped off of this. -_-'
I SO hope you continue this. It's just far too good to dispose of! I love how you captured Vaati. I probably was laughing so loud that my Mom thought I went insane when Lydia shouted "DAMN IT, MIKALA!" It's funny cause my BFF and I do that to each other when we tell the other to do something and then it backfires. Sometimes we'll just beat the other one up and call them a dumbass. 8D We're so evil to each other.
This is freakin' amazing. I love Mikala, she's hillarious. Yay for Death Mountain and Mikala leading them all over the damn globe. ^-^
Poor Vaati got his ass kicked by the two of them in chapter 1. I was laughing my ass off during that chapter.
The whole scene with the boy asking those questions reminded me of an oneshot I read called "Why Mr. Purple Man" which probably ripped off of this. -_-'
I SO hope you continue this. It's just far too good to dispose of! I love how you captured Vaati. I probably was laughing so loud that my Mom thought I went insane when Lydia shouted "DAMN IT, MIKALA!" It's funny cause my BFF and I do that to each other when we tell the other to do something and then it backfires. Sometimes we'll just beat the other one up and call them a dumbass. 8D We're so evil to each other.
6/13/2009 c4 junkaccount
LOL, Mr. Purple Flying Man! That's so funny... This is like the fourth time I'd read this chap since U never update... I really like this story! It's kinda funny. Can U please update soon?
LOL, Mr. Purple Flying Man! That's so funny... This is like the fourth time I'd read this chap since U never update... I really like this story! It's kinda funny. Can U please update soon?
2/27/2009 c4 7Cutiecat
If Lala doesn't have the light force, is it just hiding in her? Like, does she not have her power yet? Or is she not the princess? Is Mika the princess instead? That would be kinda interesting. ^_^ Please keep writing, I really like this story.
If Lala doesn't have the light force, is it just hiding in her? Like, does she not have her power yet? Or is she not the princess? Is Mika the princess instead? That would be kinda interesting. ^_^ Please keep writing, I really like this story.
2/18/2009 c4 dekudiva
Hmm, did I forget to review this? I suppose I did. Anyway, I'm enjoying it so far. My only complaint is, well...update more often! I seriously forgot that this story even existed because it hadn't been updated in so long.
Hmm, did I forget to review this? I suppose I did. Anyway, I'm enjoying it so far. My only complaint is, well...update more often! I seriously forgot that this story even existed because it hadn't been updated in so long.
2/10/2009 c4 futomaki007
lol Mika is hilarious. and Vaati's frustration is the most amusing thing ive read about all day haha. ur story is awesome so keep writing!
lol Mika is hilarious. and Vaati's frustration is the most amusing thing ive read about all day haha. ur story is awesome so keep writing!
2/10/2009 c4 39Ai Star
nice poor Mika and Lala, i think he got the wrong girl i think Mika is due to her knowledge, this is really good! keep up the good work! update soon! ^w^
nice poor Mika and Lala, i think he got the wrong girl i think Mika is due to her knowledge, this is really good! keep up the good work! update soon! ^w^
1/11/2009 c3 futomaki007
AWESOME STORY! I love stories where Vaati is stuck in the modern world, it makes for interesting situations. VaatixOCs are rare and it's a shame. Thank you for making one! Keep writing! I hope you don't abandon this story cuz its really good!
AWESOME STORY! I love stories where Vaati is stuck in the modern world, it makes for interesting situations. VaatixOCs are rare and it's a shame. Thank you for making one! Keep writing! I hope you don't abandon this story cuz its really good!
12/24/2008 c3 KikiKnight
This a cute funny story. I dont know why ppl dont write about Vaati. Good job.
This a cute funny story. I dont know why ppl dont write about Vaati. Good job.