for One Little Kiss2/26/2011 c4 
8WolfFrenzy5
This is an amazing story! i really enjoyed reading what you have posted so far and cant wait for the next chapter! please update as soon as possible (im not rushing you though, even i have updating problems Haha)
8WolfFrenzy5This is an amazing story! i really enjoyed reading what you have posted so far and cant wait for the next chapter! please update as soon as possible (im not rushing you though, even i have updating problems Haha)
2/22/2011 c4 2Superfan8
The kissing scenes are pretty hot and I really like the cute little Sasuke. I do hope you plan to continue this!
2Superfan8The kissing scenes are pretty hot and I really like the cute little Sasuke. I do hope you plan to continue this!
1/16/2011 c1 10FACELESSWRITER11
This story is so good, I was hooked chapter after chapter. I cannot wait for you to write more!
10FACELESSWRITER11This story is so good, I was hooked chapter after chapter. I cannot wait for you to write more!
4/11/2010 c4 4The Guild of Zeros
This story is so good I wish I had some magical ideas to float to you but since i don't, Ill just be waiting patiently until you update *begs* :D
4The Guild of ZerosThis story is so good I wish I had some magical ideas to float to you but since i don't, Ill just be waiting patiently until you update *begs* :D
4/8/2010 c4 3Swiping Monocles
The last part made me go "aww".
I actually really like the plot so far, so kudos to you, keep up the good work.
^-^
3Swiping MonoclesThe last part made me go "aww".
I actually really like the plot so far, so kudos to you, keep up the good work.
^-^
2/19/2010 c4 The guild of zeros
I really love this story, I would be so happy if you would update as soon as you can no rush *hyper active mode* yeah so...
BTW sorry I'm too lazy to log in :P
I really love this story, I would be so happy if you would update as soon as you can no rush *hyper active mode* yeah so...
BTW sorry I'm too lazy to log in :P
2/14/2010 c4 6someoneudontknow5
Yayz! You updated! I'm so glad! And yay! They're at with the Akatsuki! SASORI DANNA! Argh... Inner fangirl showing... sorry.
Sasuke is so cute! I love the way this story is going and I really hope you update soon, and this is really good for a first story!
Ok, that's all^^
p.s; sasori! *squeal* Argh... stupid inner fangirl. Anyway, hope you update soon ^^
6someoneudontknow5Yayz! You updated! I'm so glad! And yay! They're at with the Akatsuki! SASORI DANNA! Argh... Inner fangirl showing... sorry.
Sasuke is so cute! I love the way this story is going and I really hope you update soon, and this is really good for a first story!
Ok, that's all^^
p.s; sasori! *squeal* Argh... stupid inner fangirl. Anyway, hope you update soon ^^
2/11/2010 c3 2Koizumi Romi
No worries! This is pretty good, considering the slight lack of proper punctuation. ;) I actually think that Itachi and Sasuke should try to start a new life in a different part of Japan or something, maybe change their names. And if you ever need a beta, PM me! :D I'd be honoured to work with you on this story!
2Koizumi RomiNo worries! This is pretty good, considering the slight lack of proper punctuation. ;) I actually think that Itachi and Sasuke should try to start a new life in a different part of Japan or something, maybe change their names. And if you ever need a beta, PM me! :D I'd be honoured to work with you on this story!
2/11/2010 c3 4Ripper-Jack-Ripper
Nyo not adoption. um help well what are you planning? I mean you do a bit with his friends spend a little time with, then have a time skip to when you know sassuke's just a bit older like 13- 15 yrs old-ish (or younger) that way it doesnt kinda dron on. You could re-introduce the parents(they could have a run in w/ sasu) or something. You know to give it a twist ad a small amount of back story of some of the insignificant things that happend during the time skip or somthin like that...that good for suggestions and help? anyways looking forword to annother chapter!
4Ripper-Jack-RipperNyo not adoption. um help well what are you planning? I mean you do a bit with his friends spend a little time with, then have a time skip to when you know sassuke's just a bit older like 13- 15 yrs old-ish (or younger) that way it doesnt kinda dron on. You could re-introduce the parents(they could have a run in w/ sasu) or something. You know to give it a twist ad a small amount of back story of some of the insignificant things that happend during the time skip or somthin like that...that good for suggestions and help? anyways looking forword to annother chapter!
2/9/2010 c3 5aeonreclipse
I LOVE, and maybe I didn't read well enough if it's in there but, how old is sasuke-chan?
5aeonreclipseI LOVE, and maybe I didn't read well enough if it's in there but, how old is sasuke-chan?
2/9/2010 c3 3Panda-Moo15
I like your idea.. the overall story, however I must say (with no offence intended) the spelling and grammar, I found, was quite appalling. I realise this might be because you simply pressed the wrong key but I must ask you to next time thoroughly check over your work.
To be a great writer you must first master grammar and spelling. I'm sure you'll manage though. Just some slip ups.
Again, great story. I look forward to reading more.
-Pandabear.
3Panda-Moo15I like your idea.. the overall story, however I must say (with no offence intended) the spelling and grammar, I found, was quite appalling. I realise this might be because you simply pressed the wrong key but I must ask you to next time thoroughly check over your work.
To be a great writer you must first master grammar and spelling. I'm sure you'll manage though. Just some slip ups.
Again, great story. I look forward to reading more.
-Pandabear.