for Partners8/15/2009 c33 
29Kloudy Reignfall
33. Hunt
WHAT? A cliffhanger? Terrible! I was expecting to be able to take a break to work on something else, but now I have to keep reading! Tch. Look what you've done!
... ^_^
-Eloarei
29Kloudy Reignfall33. Hunt
WHAT? A cliffhanger? Terrible! I was expecting to be able to take a break to work on something else, but now I have to keep reading! Tch. Look what you've done!
... ^_^
-Eloarei
8/14/2009 c31 Kloudy Reignfall
31. On Hold
Oh, Prowl. :3 How I adore it when you tease your silly and oft-drunk lover and then feign innocence. ^_^ I think the 5th paragraph here (starting with "Prowl", ending with "thigh") is probably one of the greatest scenes I've had the priveledge to imagine in quite some time. =)
I just wonder what goes through their clients' minds.
-Eloarei
31. On Hold
Oh, Prowl. :3 How I adore it when you tease your silly and oft-drunk lover and then feign innocence. ^_^ I think the 5th paragraph here (starting with "Prowl", ending with "thigh") is probably one of the greatest scenes I've had the priveledge to imagine in quite some time. =)
I just wonder what goes through their clients' minds.
-Eloarei
8/14/2009 c29 Kloudy Reignfall
29. Anniversary
Okay, you can't keep writing stuff that makes me smile like this! I'm running out of adjectives, and I'd hate to start sounding like a broken-record reviewer. Honestly, I don't have anything coherent to say about how much I like this, but I want to review and express my love anyway, you know? Wish I could just upload an emotion and be done with it. ^^;
Oh, I guess I'll say something about the previous chapters. I'm surprisingly in love with the backstory chapters, even though there's no mention of Prowl or their relationship in them at all. But they're extremely interesting to read, they come off like a highly professional sci-fi novel, except, you know, better. They have enough of an element of danger, war, and alien-ness to give the impression of a different time and world, but not so much that it makes it difficult or uncomfortable to read, like many sci-fi novels I've attempted to read. So, um. Yes, they're good. Love to read them. ^_^
Next!
-Eloarei
29. Anniversary
Okay, you can't keep writing stuff that makes me smile like this! I'm running out of adjectives, and I'd hate to start sounding like a broken-record reviewer. Honestly, I don't have anything coherent to say about how much I like this, but I want to review and express my love anyway, you know? Wish I could just upload an emotion and be done with it. ^^;
Oh, I guess I'll say something about the previous chapters. I'm surprisingly in love with the backstory chapters, even though there's no mention of Prowl or their relationship in them at all. But they're extremely interesting to read, they come off like a highly professional sci-fi novel, except, you know, better. They have enough of an element of danger, war, and alien-ness to give the impression of a different time and world, but not so much that it makes it difficult or uncomfortable to read, like many sci-fi novels I've attempted to read. So, um. Yes, they're good. Love to read them. ^_^
Next!
-Eloarei
8/13/2009 c26 Kloudy Reignfall
26. To learn, love, and grow.
I adore your way of ending this chapter. The words you use, the swelling, optimistic feeling make it really heartwarming. It would be a perfect place to stop for the night... but why would I want to do that? ^_^
-Eloarei
26. To learn, love, and grow.
I adore your way of ending this chapter. The words you use, the swelling, optimistic feeling make it really heartwarming. It would be a perfect place to stop for the night... but why would I want to do that? ^_^
-Eloarei
8/12/2009 c24 Kloudy Reignfall
24. Friends
Ah, Torque! I didn't know she was... indiginous to Partners! I like the new spin it puts on a character I already love. =) But geez, it surprised me that she'd be so old! (I love it!) Had never even thought about a time before 'bot and 'con. It's interesting.
Random thought: I was particularly amused by a part where you mentioned her sitting on 'her silly bench' or something of the sort. ^_^ I love how it implies Lockdown's mood.
Can't wait to see how Prowl deals with Torque in this universe. But, not tonight.. (Sleep is so overrated, but neccessary in more than one way. ^^; )
-Eloarei
24. Friends
Ah, Torque! I didn't know she was... indiginous to Partners! I like the new spin it puts on a character I already love. =) But geez, it surprised me that she'd be so old! (I love it!) Had never even thought about a time before 'bot and 'con. It's interesting.
Random thought: I was particularly amused by a part where you mentioned her sitting on 'her silly bench' or something of the sort. ^_^ I love how it implies Lockdown's mood.
Can't wait to see how Prowl deals with Torque in this universe. But, not tonight.. (Sleep is so overrated, but neccessary in more than one way. ^^; )
-Eloarei
8/12/2009 c23 Kloudy Reignfall
23. Talent
Ok. So. *sigh* I FINALLY FINISHED watching TFA. And, I told you, I'm no good at handling... gah, I can't say it. (Sure, Wikipedia had ruined it for me before I even started the series, but that doesn't make it any less upsetting!)
Er, I guess what I'm trying to say is: I love love love your story, and it's my only solace in the face of this dramatic tragedy about which I will surely whine for days on end. So, thanks.
About the vibrations: I'm starting to think Cybertronians and Humans have quite a few more similarities than originally imagined. ^_^ But enough differences not to have to give this a ridiculously high rating. Ah, how I love insinuation and robot terminology.
-Eloarei
23. Talent
Ok. So. *sigh* I FINALLY FINISHED watching TFA. And, I told you, I'm no good at handling... gah, I can't say it. (Sure, Wikipedia had ruined it for me before I even started the series, but that doesn't make it any less upsetting!)
Er, I guess what I'm trying to say is: I love love love your story, and it's my only solace in the face of this dramatic tragedy about which I will surely whine for days on end. So, thanks.
About the vibrations: I'm starting to think Cybertronians and Humans have quite a few more similarities than originally imagined. ^_^ But enough differences not to have to give this a ridiculously high rating. Ah, how I love insinuation and robot terminology.
-Eloarei
8/11/2009 c22 Kloudy Reignfall
22. Picturesque
Oh man you had me worried there for a minute! I really thought you were being serious. But of course, I should have known. *shakes head fondly* I do feel a little bad for Swindle, though. ...Ok, no I don't, not really. ^_^
Alright, this is a perfect stopping place. I better leave off for the night.
-Eloarei
22. Picturesque
Oh man you had me worried there for a minute! I really thought you were being serious. But of course, I should have known. *shakes head fondly* I do feel a little bad for Swindle, though. ...Ok, no I don't, not really. ^_^
Alright, this is a perfect stopping place. I better leave off for the night.
-Eloarei
8/11/2009 c21 Kloudy Reignfall
21. Change
*sigh* I'm so bad at handling character death, but somehow I can't keep myself away from it. I was worried during the last chapter that things were really going to go to hell, but I'm glad things got a little better. Even though that last couple sentences wrenched at my heart. *sniffle* I gotta stop listening to emotional music while I read. Geez.
Next. ...Or sleep? Hm. Hard choice. *rolls eyes*
-Eloarei
21. Change
*sigh* I'm so bad at handling character death, but somehow I can't keep myself away from it. I was worried during the last chapter that things were really going to go to hell, but I'm glad things got a little better. Even though that last couple sentences wrenched at my heart. *sniffle* I gotta stop listening to emotional music while I read. Geez.
Next. ...Or sleep? Hm. Hard choice. *rolls eyes*
-Eloarei
8/11/2009 c19 Kloudy Reignfall
19. Intervention
First of all- how do you have a robot strip show? I mean, aren't they always naked? ^^;
Second... er, was there a 'second'? I dunno. I like this chapter, and Swindle's ridiculous ideas. Haha he kinda reminds me of a stupid college buddy trying to convince his best friend not to get married. =) Silly guy.
-Eloarei
19. Intervention
First of all- how do you have a robot strip show? I mean, aren't they always naked? ^^;
Second... er, was there a 'second'? I dunno. I like this chapter, and Swindle's ridiculous ideas. Haha he kinda reminds me of a stupid college buddy trying to convince his best friend not to get married. =) Silly guy.
-Eloarei
8/11/2009 c17 Kloudy Reignfall
17. Rehabilitation
Ooh, this is an amzing chapter! (Is it bad that I almost always want to say 'episode'?) I, of course, am talking about the AFF version, because if you ask me, leaving it off right where it is in this version is horrible. I mean, it's missing all the good stuff! Of course, the juicy description isn't allowed, but I think without Prowl's heating 'mumbling' and Lockdown's last little worry, there's likely to be some confusion if/when you ever mention it again in the future.
Then again, you're a wonderful author, so I'm sure you can work around any limitations. =)
Merge, merge, merge! Eighty years is too long to be dancing around the subject, even for creatures with a bajillion year lifespan.
To the next chapter I go!
-Eloarei
17. Rehabilitation
Ooh, this is an amzing chapter! (Is it bad that I almost always want to say 'episode'?) I, of course, am talking about the AFF version, because if you ask me, leaving it off right where it is in this version is horrible. I mean, it's missing all the good stuff! Of course, the juicy description isn't allowed, but I think without Prowl's heating 'mumbling' and Lockdown's last little worry, there's likely to be some confusion if/when you ever mention it again in the future.
Then again, you're a wonderful author, so I'm sure you can work around any limitations. =)
Merge, merge, merge! Eighty years is too long to be dancing around the subject, even for creatures with a bajillion year lifespan.
To the next chapter I go!
-Eloarei
8/10/2009 c9 Kloudy Reignfall
9. Threat
They have a JOINT account now? If that doesn't spell trust on Lockdown's part, nothing does. =D
Also, let me take this opportunity to mention how much I love the filthy robot cursing. ^_^ I find it utterly hilarious, especially when I try to figure out exactly what each word or phrase would translate to in human English.
Jealous Lockdown for the win!
-Eloarei
9. Threat
They have a JOINT account now? If that doesn't spell trust on Lockdown's part, nothing does. =D
Also, let me take this opportunity to mention how much I love the filthy robot cursing. ^_^ I find it utterly hilarious, especially when I try to figure out exactly what each word or phrase would translate to in human English.
Jealous Lockdown for the win!
-Eloarei
8/9/2009 c7 Kloudy Reignfall
7. Severance of Self
Whew, this is painful to read. Emotionally, you know? I'm sure any physical pain Prowl felt was nothing. This sort of decision- it hurts just thinking about having to make it. And even though he's still essentially the same person, I know, it's symbolic. Too much so to think things could possibly stay the same. Yeah, that's a weighty decision.
Makes me glad humans' alleigances are internal.
-Eloarei
7. Severance of Self
Whew, this is painful to read. Emotionally, you know? I'm sure any physical pain Prowl felt was nothing. This sort of decision- it hurts just thinking about having to make it. And even though he's still essentially the same person, I know, it's symbolic. Too much so to think things could possibly stay the same. Yeah, that's a weighty decision.
Makes me glad humans' alleigances are internal.
-Eloarei
8/9/2009 c6 Kloudy Reignfall
Aww, my favorite chapter so far! So sweetly sad, Prowl holding on to the little flower, like a piece of the past I suppose. I wonder if he'll go back to Earth at all, or if it'll be too late even if he does.
I always feel like Prowl's interest in organics makes me appreciate nature more. =)
-Eloarei
Aww, my favorite chapter so far! So sweetly sad, Prowl holding on to the little flower, like a piece of the past I suppose. I wonder if he'll go back to Earth at all, or if it'll be too late even if he does.
I always feel like Prowl's interest in organics makes me appreciate nature more. =)
-Eloarei
8/9/2009 c1 Kloudy Reignfall
Ah I am such an impatient little so-and-so! I'm so glad to finally get to read this! (And yeah, it may only have been a week or so since I've started drooling over the idea, but it really seems like a long time!)
So. This seems like a good place to start. I'm HIGHLY curious to see where it'll go from here; the possibilties seem endless, and with 50+ chapters, I have a feeling I won't be disappointed. (Except for the disappointment I'll doubtlessly feel at the end, which I am already dreading. ^^; )
Hopefully I can pace myself with this story. I'm a slow reader, luckily, so it'll take me at least several days to catch up. Haha I just want to enjoy this for as long as possible.
Er, right. So. Next chapter! *excited*
-Eloarei
Ah I am such an impatient little so-and-so! I'm so glad to finally get to read this! (And yeah, it may only have been a week or so since I've started drooling over the idea, but it really seems like a long time!)
So. This seems like a good place to start. I'm HIGHLY curious to see where it'll go from here; the possibilties seem endless, and with 50+ chapters, I have a feeling I won't be disappointed. (Except for the disappointment I'll doubtlessly feel at the end, which I am already dreading. ^^; )
Hopefully I can pace myself with this story. I'm a slow reader, luckily, so it'll take me at least several days to catch up. Haha I just want to enjoy this for as long as possible.
Er, right. So. Next chapter! *excited*
-Eloarei
8/8/2009 c54 Knocks
I'm sure at some point Swindle or someone else will spill the beans to Prowl, but at least he's better for now. Thanks for resolving this!
I'm sure at some point Swindle or someone else will spill the beans to Prowl, but at least he's better for now. Thanks for resolving this!