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129Cyndi
I think I spent this whole chapter just laughing my butt off. Lockdown is a perv!
129CyndiI think I spent this whole chapter just laughing my butt off. Lockdown is a perv!
11/18/2013 c29 Guest
Wow. Somebody's a review whore. It's a good thing you've already got 41 more chapter for me to read. On the bright side, this fic is amazing!
Wow. Somebody's a review whore. It's a good thing you've already got 41 more chapter for me to read. On the bright side, this fic is amazing!
7/22/2012 c33 Black-Panther lover
umm, been lurking on this fic forever, a couple years in fact, I havent actually read the whole thing threw yet (I'll get there some day) and I love it. I do. I love all dom lockdown and sorta sub prowl. I even love it better when I go to AFF, and read the whole part of the chapters that you do not deem able to go on here, so imagine my suprise when I go to AFF to read Hunt, (chapter 33), and didnt find it up there... Could I get the full copy of it, and any others that you didnt post on AFF that you meant to? I really do love it. Your writting and ideas are awesome. And always leaves me wanting more. (Hence the been coming on and off for years lol) So pretty please? With prowl on top?
Panther
umm, been lurking on this fic forever, a couple years in fact, I havent actually read the whole thing threw yet (I'll get there some day) and I love it. I do. I love all dom lockdown and sorta sub prowl. I even love it better when I go to AFF, and read the whole part of the chapters that you do not deem able to go on here, so imagine my suprise when I go to AFF to read Hunt, (chapter 33), and didnt find it up there... Could I get the full copy of it, and any others that you didnt post on AFF that you meant to? I really do love it. Your writting and ideas are awesome. And always leaves me wanting more. (Hence the been coming on and off for years lol) So pretty please? With prowl on top?
Panther
9/18/2011 c70 infinityinmirrors
Oh my gooodddddd! I've just spent three days busting my way through this monster and IM SO SAD ITS OVER D: I started reading it for the lulz as it was such a random pairing but now i just love them so much! I hope your still considering a sequel! Damn i hate it when i miss the boat, by the time i finish reading its all over and done with :( Anyway just wanted to let you know that i think your an amazing writer and even though i literally screamed my way through all the Anicon chapters i utterly adore this story. You've given Lockdown a depth i never thought possible and im just dying for more. I also loved Torque to death, i don't see her as being a Mary Sue at all, at least not in the overly obvious tacky way that most Sue's are.
Thankyou so much for such a fantastic story XD
Oh my gooodddddd! I've just spent three days busting my way through this monster and IM SO SAD ITS OVER D: I started reading it for the lulz as it was such a random pairing but now i just love them so much! I hope your still considering a sequel! Damn i hate it when i miss the boat, by the time i finish reading its all over and done with :( Anyway just wanted to let you know that i think your an amazing writer and even though i literally screamed my way through all the Anicon chapters i utterly adore this story. You've given Lockdown a depth i never thought possible and im just dying for more. I also loved Torque to death, i don't see her as being a Mary Sue at all, at least not in the overly obvious tacky way that most Sue's are.
Thankyou so much for such a fantastic story XD
8/31/2011 c70 Httw
This was an amazing and beautiful piece. Like I said before, it was worth it to read 70 chapters. You had me laughing at Prowl and Lockdown, seething at Anicon and empathizing with Torque- who I thought was a great character. I could see how somebody might say she was a bit sue-ish-what- like ten chapters back? But I felt even then you had already built her up enough to be a respectable character on her own when she first showed up. I honestly liked her as a supporting character.
Today I was sitting in my living room when my sister got back from school and I looked at her and said, "I finished it last night... Now what do I do?" So now I am off to read your other stories and damn am I excited!
This was an amazing and beautiful piece. Like I said before, it was worth it to read 70 chapters. You had me laughing at Prowl and Lockdown, seething at Anicon and empathizing with Torque- who I thought was a great character. I could see how somebody might say she was a bit sue-ish-what- like ten chapters back? But I felt even then you had already built her up enough to be a respectable character on her own when she first showed up. I honestly liked her as a supporting character.
Today I was sitting in my living room when my sister got back from school and I looked at her and said, "I finished it last night... Now what do I do?" So now I am off to read your other stories and damn am I excited!
8/29/2011 c58 Httw
You have me giggling all through the chapter and completely turn it around to ice freezing my stomach. Funny fact? I believe the Greeks (might've been someone else) originally thought their heart and emotions were in their stomach... I feel like that's were mine are at the moment. D: Torque ain't a throwaway OC! She better be a-okay by the end of this ark! ...and that damned Anicon better have nothing to do with this!
You have me giggling all through the chapter and completely turn it around to ice freezing my stomach. Funny fact? I believe the Greeks (might've been someone else) originally thought their heart and emotions were in their stomach... I feel like that's were mine are at the moment. D: Torque ain't a throwaway OC! She better be a-okay by the end of this ark! ...and that damned Anicon better have nothing to do with this!
8/28/2011 c44 Httw
That anguished cry you just heard? Yeah, that was me. And I've take into consideration what you've said about Anicon and unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to keep myself from cheering once Lockdown gets around to kicking ass.
That anguished cry you just heard? Yeah, that was me. And I've take into consideration what you've said about Anicon and unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to keep myself from cheering once Lockdown gets around to kicking ass.
8/27/2011 c70 Anon
Wow, just wow. It's been a great 70 chapters. I didn't want it to end. Why did it have to end? ;_;
Welp, I'm off to read Odd Couple. You've got me hooked on this pairing.
Wow, just wow. It's been a great 70 chapters. I didn't want it to end. Why did it have to end? ;_;
Welp, I'm off to read Odd Couple. You've got me hooked on this pairing.
8/26/2011 c35 Httw
INORGANIC? As in, Swindle? I can see this going very well... but most likely pretty badly. Swindle better be cowed into giving Lockdown all the help he can!
INORGANIC? As in, Swindle? I can see this going very well... but most likely pretty badly. Swindle better be cowed into giving Lockdown all the help he can!
8/26/2011 c33 Httw
Oh my goodness! I need a fan or something because that was hot! I went over to AFF, but I didn't see a corresponding chapter for this one... is it still there? Am I just blind from the hotness that these two are?
I wasn't really into Prowl much when I first watched TFA, but man! I looove your Prowl! He's so mischievous! And Lockdown is always a great laugh; him and his double standards. :D
Oh my goodness! I need a fan or something because that was hot! I went over to AFF, but I didn't see a corresponding chapter for this one... is it still there? Am I just blind from the hotness that these two are?
I wasn't really into Prowl much when I first watched TFA, but man! I looove your Prowl! He's so mischievous! And Lockdown is always a great laugh; him and his double standards. :D
8/23/2011 c29 Httw
I usually hold off until the "end" of the story to leave a review, but because this one is so long and this chapter so warm and fluffy I couldn't resist. Your note there at the top helped too... I felt just a little guilty for leaving nothing.
I am in love with these two characters now, thanks to you. And together they are at times funny, horrifying, tenderly sweet, terrifying, ridiculous- and damn! But that list would be unending! I feel the characterizations are perfect and your head-cannon for Lockdown is fascinating! I had originally thought that Moot might have been some sort of pseudo naive love interest Lockdown had used up completely, but the reality was so strikingly brutal and unattached. Knowing her as the 'ghost' she is now makes my heart reach out to her, but at the same time I'm relieved there wasn't a deep connection to screw up in the first place.
I am having such an amazing time reading this story. This is still day two and when I told my sister how many chapters I had to go through she was aghast. "Why would you bother?" she asked me. There are definitely some stories that are more exceptional and worthwhile to bother with, in my opinion.
I usually hold off until the "end" of the story to leave a review, but because this one is so long and this chapter so warm and fluffy I couldn't resist. Your note there at the top helped too... I felt just a little guilty for leaving nothing.
I am in love with these two characters now, thanks to you. And together they are at times funny, horrifying, tenderly sweet, terrifying, ridiculous- and damn! But that list would be unending! I feel the characterizations are perfect and your head-cannon for Lockdown is fascinating! I had originally thought that Moot might have been some sort of pseudo naive love interest Lockdown had used up completely, but the reality was so strikingly brutal and unattached. Knowing her as the 'ghost' she is now makes my heart reach out to her, but at the same time I'm relieved there wasn't a deep connection to screw up in the first place.
I am having such an amazing time reading this story. This is still day two and when I told my sister how many chapters I had to go through she was aghast. "Why would you bother?" she asked me. There are definitely some stories that are more exceptional and worthwhile to bother with, in my opinion.
6/23/2011 c70 5Patcher
This has been an intense, exciting 70 chapters. Awesomness just doesn't cut it. Drama, angst, tragedy, humor, romance - hey, it's a package! And damn if I didn't love it. I've never been one to read a Lockdown & Prowl fic, but this one... it was nothing short of amazing. Ooooh, don't get me started on character development and exploration. So many sides of Prowl and Lockdown I've never seen before! It was an eye-opener, and well, let's just say it's one of the most darn brilliant thing I've ever read.
For OCs, Torque was a fascinating character. She's such a sweetie (not exactly a word I would use on her, but it still fits, for some reason)! I adore her. :)
Anicon... I hated him the moment he appeared. Please note that I am saying this on not a level of 'I hate OCs in general', but on a personal level. His character is realistic, and I would have loved him if he wasn't trying to tear Prowl and Lockdown apart. I don't really know how to explain this, but that's just how it is. I almost pitied him when Prowl said that he deserved to 'be alone until the end of time'. Almost.
5PatcherThis has been an intense, exciting 70 chapters. Awesomness just doesn't cut it. Drama, angst, tragedy, humor, romance - hey, it's a package! And damn if I didn't love it. I've never been one to read a Lockdown & Prowl fic, but this one... it was nothing short of amazing. Ooooh, don't get me started on character development and exploration. So many sides of Prowl and Lockdown I've never seen before! It was an eye-opener, and well, let's just say it's one of the most darn brilliant thing I've ever read.
For OCs, Torque was a fascinating character. She's such a sweetie (not exactly a word I would use on her, but it still fits, for some reason)! I adore her. :)
Anicon... I hated him the moment he appeared. Please note that I am saying this on not a level of 'I hate OCs in general', but on a personal level. His character is realistic, and I would have loved him if he wasn't trying to tear Prowl and Lockdown apart. I don't really know how to explain this, but that's just how it is. I almost pitied him when Prowl said that he deserved to 'be alone until the end of time'. Almost.
5/16/2011 c70 154NeverMineToHold
I'm floored - and goddamn tired, because I did nothing but reading the last few days °-° This fic is sooo wonderful! I love how you show us Prowl and Lockdown, hell, I even love your OCs, and that's a first!
Sorry, no constructive criticism from me - just WOW! And thank you for writing this!
154NeverMineToHoldI'm floored - and goddamn tired, because I did nothing but reading the last few days °-° This fic is sooo wonderful! I love how you show us Prowl and Lockdown, hell, I even love your OCs, and that's a first!
Sorry, no constructive criticism from me - just WOW! And thank you for writing this!
6/18/2010 c10 1ladyredvelvet
Your a wonderful writer! I cannot stop reading this it is excellent. And the way you portray Prowl and Lockdown is fantastic! *runs off to read more* 3
1ladyredvelvetYour a wonderful writer! I cannot stop reading this it is excellent. And the way you portray Prowl and Lockdown is fantastic! *runs off to read more* 3