for Under the Same Roof3/3/2014 c1 
17Smoke
It is a little tough to follow who is speaking when another character's actions come on the same line. I don't seem to be able to select a block of text to give an example.
17SmokeIt is a little tough to follow who is speaking when another character's actions come on the same line. I don't seem to be able to select a block of text to give an example.
2/15/2013 c3 Dark Silence
Awesome story, I like what you did here with kain and his son's. Alot of great ideas and imagination. Good job
Awesome story, I like what you did here with kain and his son's. Alot of great ideas and imagination. Good job
12/11/2011 c3 8The Grim Reeper
Vorador's such a meanie, eating their cake. If I were the Queen of Hearts, I'd shout, "Off with his head!" Keep up the good work Lil' V! Great chapter ;)
8The Grim ReeperVorador's such a meanie, eating their cake. If I were the Queen of Hearts, I'd shout, "Off with his head!" Keep up the good work Lil' V! Great chapter ;)
5/4/2010 c2 The Grim Reeper
In my current state, I'm currently picturing a chibi Kain giving a chibi Raziel a little box with a pretty bow on top from reading the last bit of this chapter, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter to this :D Keep it up!
In my current state, I'm currently picturing a chibi Kain giving a chibi Raziel a little box with a pretty bow on top from reading the last bit of this chapter, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter to this :D Keep it up!
9/22/2009 c2 1Anarchived
Wow! I loved this! It made me laugh a lot, especially Kain and Vorador! And Raziel and Rahab are so cute! You have talent, my friend! And I can't wait to read more from you!
1AnarchivedWow! I loved this! It made me laugh a lot, especially Kain and Vorador! And Raziel and Rahab are so cute! You have talent, my friend! And I can't wait to read more from you!
12/27/2008 c2 ktshortstuff
hey...i really loved ur story! u should make another chapter! it was that good! =] =] =]
hey...i really loved ur story! u should make another chapter! it was that good! =] =] =]
11/2/2008 c2 3seineke-pyera
But what if food is on my mind? Like a cookie for you for writing this? Turel is my favorite person and yet I enjoy seeing him get tormented so.
I suggest a silverware war. Using tables as shields
3seineke-pyeraBut what if food is on my mind? Like a cookie for you for writing this? Turel is my favorite person and yet I enjoy seeing him get tormented so.
I suggest a silverware war. Using tables as shields
9/12/2008 c2 Dante's blade
“Raziel you poor idiot" yea i got sometimes that a lot from my parents hehehe but well it is not like it bothers me a well there is where Zephon saying comes to my little rescue XD
I want to see why Kain had for Raziel besides the beat up (XD) by the way alittle question if they are like kids how many years they have on human size 5?
Update please i want to see if Turel will beat Zephone on chest and what will happen to Raziel
“Raziel you poor idiot" yea i got sometimes that a lot from my parents hehehe but well it is not like it bothers me a well there is where Zephon saying comes to my little rescue XD
I want to see why Kain had for Raziel besides the beat up (XD) by the way alittle question if they are like kids how many years they have on human size 5?
Update please i want to see if Turel will beat Zephone on chest and what will happen to Raziel
9/3/2008 c1 Flowing Tears
all stories about kain's horrible parenting are good. If you have time make sure to write another chapter. it was funny
all stories about kain's horrible parenting are good. If you have time make sure to write another chapter. it was funny