for Incogitance10/10/2022 c1 CorlionWolf 3
Okay my comps are cutting out some words,and I don't know how to remove the reviews.
Okay my comps are cutting out some words,and I don't know how to remove the reviews.
10/10/2022 c1 CorlionWolf 3
Do ya think I CARE ABOUT I THINK I ship thank you dear writer,for finally admitting,Squirrely should've picked it IS a fun AU to write about!Or is that just me?Oh well.(p.s,this is not an offense to actual BrambleSquirrel what ya want,I don't care.)
Do ya think I CARE ABOUT I THINK I ship thank you dear writer,for finally admitting,Squirrely should've picked it IS a fun AU to write about!Or is that just me?Oh well.(p.s,this is not an offense to actual BrambleSquirrel what ya want,I don't care.)
7/8/2020 c6 Hailing Storm
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7/8/2020 c1 Hailing Storm
Thank you.
AshxSquirrel is much better than SquirrelxBramble (well…before Long Shadows).
Thank you.
AshxSquirrel is much better than SquirrelxBramble (well…before Long Shadows).
11/20/2017 c12 
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That was a good story. It seemed realistic enough for me, but to be honest, when it comes to cats and personalities and those subtle small lines between good and bad... I suck. Something might be very unrealistic, and I think it comes off as realistic. But for a story of this direction and nature, I think you did well.
Bittersweet ending, too.
66Forestfire34720That was a good story. It seemed realistic enough for me, but to be honest, when it comes to cats and personalities and those subtle small lines between good and bad... I suck. Something might be very unrealistic, and I think it comes off as realistic. But for a story of this direction and nature, I think you did well.
Bittersweet ending, too.
6/13/2017 c12 30LavenderCrystalOfRoses
I don't mind Birchfall. It doesn't make sense, but it feels right.
30LavenderCrystalOfRosesI don't mind Birchfall. It doesn't make sense, but it feels right.
3/8/2017 c2 Blackheart
JESUS it is hard to find a fan fiction of this quality on this amazing ship its in my top 5 favorite ships. This story is up there in my tops, if you could write one of Jayfeather and I dunno Briarlight, then I would be like, sign me up i gotta review it everyday! I can find no flaws in the story but a few spelling mistakes and mentioning of things they don't actually know.
~Blackheart of River Clan
JESUS it is hard to find a fan fiction of this quality on this amazing ship its in my top 5 favorite ships. This story is up there in my tops, if you could write one of Jayfeather and I dunno Briarlight, then I would be like, sign me up i gotta review it everyday! I can find no flaws in the story but a few spelling mistakes and mentioning of things they don't actually know.
~Blackheart of River Clan
9/4/2016 c3 Guest
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5/5/2016 c1 Guest
You are so wrong, Ashfur tried to kill them all
You are so wrong, Ashfur tried to kill them all
2/23/2016 c12 NightFallEclipse
...Wow. This Is My Review For The Finished Project: Is It NOT Good To Fan-girl Over This?
The Story-line Was Immersive And Clever, And Very Descriptive. Somehow, This Manages To Remind Me Of My Warriors Fan-fiction That's not Written YET.
...Wow. This Is My Review For The Finished Project: Is It NOT Good To Fan-girl Over This?
The Story-line Was Immersive And Clever, And Very Descriptive. Somehow, This Manages To Remind Me Of My Warriors Fan-fiction That's not Written YET.
2/23/2016 c2 NightFallEclipse
This Is ... Amazing. It Makes Me Think This Would Be How AshFur Felt. I'm Still Reading this, Of Course, But I KNOW Bramble's Gonna Kill Firestar In The Blood Will Spill Blood Prophecy.
This Is ... Amazing. It Makes Me Think This Would Be How AshFur Felt. I'm Still Reading this, Of Course, But I KNOW Bramble's Gonna Kill Firestar In The Blood Will Spill Blood Prophecy.
1/26/2015 c12 9Photography Bird
Holey. That was so unexpected.
They all just, died. Firestar. Brambleclaw. and Ashfur. I think Hawkfrost died.. too.. and.. all..
I.. I don't even know anymore. Poor Squirrelflight, though.
(I love this story/chapter and all these twisted plots! This have been, by far, the best warriors story I've ever read.)
9Photography BirdHoley. That was so unexpected.
They all just, died. Firestar. Brambleclaw. and Ashfur. I think Hawkfrost died.. too.. and.. all..
I.. I don't even know anymore. Poor Squirrelflight, though.
(I love this story/chapter and all these twisted plots! This have been, by far, the best warriors story I've ever read.)
1/26/2015 c6 Photography Bird
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R-ripplepaw... Y-you, I.. wow. She was only an apprentice ;u;
Brambleclaw... w-why... Hawkfrost.. you.. I.. can't ;w;
(wonderful chapter! that plot-twist, though.)
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R-ripplepaw... Y-you, I.. wow. She was only an apprentice ;u;
Brambleclaw... w-why... Hawkfrost.. you.. I.. can't ;w;
(wonderful chapter! that plot-twist, though.)