for beLLs6/24/2011 c1 
8CountessElizabethCathery
wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. Wait a mintue. You say this sucked? This is one of the most interesting writing styles I've seen in a good long time! And I very much liked it! Alot! Originally I was going to use a review to get back to you since your PM is disabled but, then I read this. And can I simply say one thing? D'AWWWWWWWWW! Seriously the best non-rated-M L/LY story I've read in a very very very long time. very nice.
ps. I put chapters in oneshots because sometimes quite awhile later I'll get inspiration and add another oneshot of sorts.
8CountessElizabethCatherywow, wow, wow, wow, wow. Wait a mintue. You say this sucked? This is one of the most interesting writing styles I've seen in a good long time! And I very much liked it! Alot! Originally I was going to use a review to get back to you since your PM is disabled but, then I read this. And can I simply say one thing? D'AWWWWWWWWW! Seriously the best non-rated-M L/LY story I've read in a very very very long time. very nice.
ps. I put chapters in oneshots because sometimes quite awhile later I'll get inspiration and add another oneshot of sorts.
11/16/2008 c1 1mmm.waffles
How does it suck? i really liked your writting style. Sure i was a little confused at first but it began to make sense. I really enjoyed reding this. keep up the good work!
~waffles
1mmm.wafflesHow does it suck? i really liked your writting style. Sure i was a little confused at first but it began to make sense. I really enjoyed reding this. keep up the good work!
~waffles
9/11/2008 c1 54TayaCJ
Hi, i think you're story is really good! It was a little confusing at first, but it mainly makes sense. Good job!
54TayaCJHi, i think you're story is really good! It was a little confusing at first, but it mainly makes sense. Good job!
8/31/2008 c1 3chibamishiro
that was rally good, and i'm sorry you think that your writing skills make kids cry.(your profile)
3chibamishirothat was rally good, and i'm sorry you think that your writing skills make kids cry.(your profile)
8/30/2008 c1 1Mystical-Hysterical
I don't see how you think this sucks. I thought it was very well written, and I liked the style in which it was written :3.
The last line made me want to cry x3.
~Myst
1Mystical-HystericalI don't see how you think this sucks. I thought it was very well written, and I liked the style in which it was written :3.
The last line made me want to cry x3.
~Myst
8/30/2008 c1 Railynn
I loved this. Really. I almost cried. Great job!
-Rai
I loved this. Really. I almost cried. Great job!
-Rai
8/30/2008 c1 9A.Pseudonym
No, it's not bad. It's very well written and has a nice atmosphere to it. Well done!
9A.PseudonymNo, it's not bad. It's very well written and has a nice atmosphere to it. Well done!
8/30/2008 c1 Lady Sardonyx
Wow.
It's very nice and I love how it seems choppy with italics and bold everywhere. And the last line...
Just wow.
I look foward to more Death Note fics from you! :D
Wow.
It's very nice and I love how it seems choppy with italics and bold everywhere. And the last line...
Just wow.
I look foward to more Death Note fics from you! :D