for What Have I done?3/24/2019 c1 
30fanofthisfiction
It was nice you were able to capture the regret and doubt from Minato in this turning point in his life. No parent ever wants to leave a child behind to fend for themselves before they can take care of themselves and what a terrible situation Naruto was left with. Hopefully Minato can find comfort in the fact that Naruto turns out the way he does. Thanks for sharing!
30fanofthisfictionIt was nice you were able to capture the regret and doubt from Minato in this turning point in his life. No parent ever wants to leave a child behind to fend for themselves before they can take care of themselves and what a terrible situation Naruto was left with. Hopefully Minato can find comfort in the fact that Naruto turns out the way he does. Thanks for sharing!
3/23/2019 c1 Guest
Minato is a monster for doing this to his son.
Minato is a monster for doing this to his son.
2/11/2009 c1 ben
GREAT! that was awsome
GREAT! that was awsome
10/7/2008 c1 Spirits.Dawn
omg...soo sad...the ending made me tear up...please make a sequel...a story..not a one shot...a story...please!.
omg...soo sad...the ending made me tear up...please make a sequel...a story..not a one shot...a story...please!.
9/19/2008 c1 9Terminally Ambivalent
Takashi: OMG! That was great! I really think that could be a possible scenario that happened at the Yondaime's funeral.
Kakashi: Yes, but all we can do is guess.
Takashi: Yup-yup! It's kinda like the "How many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie-pop" mystery. All we can do is guess. Hey! Kakashi, even if we can't solve this mystery there is a mystery here that we can solve right now! ^^
Kakashi: Hm? And what's that?
Takashi: =_= Take of the mask. =_=
Kakashi: No. ((poofs away))
Takashi: ~ GET BACK HER YOU MOTHER *BEP*!...((no response))... *BEEP*! ... Anyways, I really liked how well your story flowed. Also, the details you used were really good. I loved the wording! Great job! Ja Ne! ^^
9Terminally AmbivalentTakashi: OMG! That was great! I really think that could be a possible scenario that happened at the Yondaime's funeral.
Kakashi: Yes, but all we can do is guess.
Takashi: Yup-yup! It's kinda like the "How many licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie-pop" mystery. All we can do is guess. Hey! Kakashi, even if we can't solve this mystery there is a mystery here that we can solve right now! ^^
Kakashi: Hm? And what's that?
Takashi: =_= Take of the mask. =_=
Kakashi: No. ((poofs away))
Takashi: ~ GET BACK HER YOU MOTHER *BEP*!...((no response))... *BEEP*! ... Anyways, I really liked how well your story flowed. Also, the details you used were really good. I loved the wording! Great job! Ja Ne! ^^
9/16/2008 c1 2IDK1314
lmao!
yes, being too serious is bad! aw, its sad! TT.TT
thanks!^^
hi mina-chan!
naru-chan got hurt today...by other fishies! (i named my fish naruto cuz it was blond! he's tail got bit cuz of sasuke (his gray!)and kyuubi (orangy red) and sasuke started to fight! it was sad and weird cuz it actually happened in the series!
i was half crying and laughing at the end! TT.TT
this is sad...
i hope mina is okay in heaven...but what happened to his wife, i mean, how did she die?
u have done nothing wrong, mina-chan, it was sasuke who betrayed him.
i cried too, so it's okay^^
2IDK1314lmao!
yes, being too serious is bad! aw, its sad! TT.TT
thanks!^^
hi mina-chan!
naru-chan got hurt today...by other fishies! (i named my fish naruto cuz it was blond! he's tail got bit cuz of sasuke (his gray!)and kyuubi (orangy red) and sasuke started to fight! it was sad and weird cuz it actually happened in the series!
i was half crying and laughing at the end! TT.TT
this is sad...
i hope mina is okay in heaven...but what happened to his wife, i mean, how did she die?
u have done nothing wrong, mina-chan, it was sasuke who betrayed him.
i cried too, so it's okay^^
8/31/2008 c1 3Chronos guardian
Amazing love, simply amazing! Man I feel so sorry for Minato-chan but things will get better. Those damn villagers had better me glad I'm not in the Naruto world or I would have beat each and ever one of them up. Thanks for the great story hon.
3Chronos guardianAmazing love, simply amazing! Man I feel so sorry for Minato-chan but things will get better. Those damn villagers had better me glad I'm not in the Naruto world or I would have beat each and ever one of them up. Thanks for the great story hon.
8/30/2008 c1 10BeMerryEatCake
This made me cry! I know you gave a warning but it's so sad! But it's really good,nice job.
10BeMerryEatCakeThis made me cry! I know you gave a warning but it's so sad! But it's really good,nice job.