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9/7/2008 c4 7NybCR
Nice story; I liked how it ended-because, really, you can never understand such a thing as "love" until you have felt it. Poor everyone else tries to explain, but even *they* didn't quite get that Prowl won't understand unless he's felt it for himself.

Which, logical, deadpan guy that he is, may never happen.
9/6/2008 c4 Hikarigirl18
Aww, I was hoping for a bit more. Still kinda cool though. There are sadly many things like this that Prowl cannot and will not be able to explain.
9/3/2008 c4 47Yami-Yugi3
Aw me like ^_^
9/3/2008 c4 20Reality Obscured
Wow. I liked it. It was different and original.
9/1/2008 c4 Sharon Smith
A fun read but somewhat disjointed, it did not seem to flow like others of yours I've read.
9/1/2008 c4 padawanjinx
Wow... what a wonderful beginning! I do hope you decide to expound on this and having Prowl to eventually understand what its like to 'love'... i always wondered, didnt he have some sort of affection for his home? And seeing it in ruins is enough to make anyone feel sad and experience heartache. Not to mention the loss of so many of his comrades during the eons on war.

Anyways, hope you do decide to write more. I would be very intrested in finding out how you deal with this situation.


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