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5/30/2018 c6 Wasted
You wasted so much effort to get to this ending. It's too bad as you had much more potential. I suggest you use better plot devices and consider how people actually act around each other. Yes, we all suspend belief for a story like Naruto, but that only becomes possible if what we're reading is somewhat believable ... the less believable you're story is, the more craft you have to use to bring it to life. ~jsm
5/30/2018 c1 Reading a book
Reading a book? That's the best mechanism you could find to introduce the argument? Crap, you'd have done better to question his sexual orientation and let her rip on that ... but a book?! So stupid.
12/27/2016 c6 80YeagerMeister31
well that was nice shame there was no lemon though would have ended it perfectly but oh well
12/27/2016 c5 YeagerMeister31
that was short wonder what happens next
12/27/2016 c4 YeagerMeister31
well this plan seems to have worked but will Naruto fall for it
12/27/2016 c3 YeagerMeister31
scheming Konoha 12 tut tut tut lol
12/27/2016 c2 YeagerMeister31
i liked this chapter it was angtsy but that's just the way i like it
12/27/2016 c1 YeagerMeister31
well this was an interesting start
12/8/2014 c6 minervatyrrell
Lmao cool story
10/18/2014 c2 3Iron Monkey Fist
Not sure what to say about what is essentially a recap chapter.
10/18/2014 c1 Iron Monkey Fist
OK, not a fan of Naruto screaming like a bitch, and the argument seems really dumb.
1/7/2014 c6 19draco122
o man that was a great way to end this story.
5/8/2011 c5 Sigh
I doubt they would be able to take out naruto so easily.
4/13/2009 c6 2BrokenPathway
awesome story :p
1/21/2009 c6 Ultraliscir
Hmm, well somehow I thought the story would be longer
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