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4/2/2021 c1 13Jimmy1201
Came back to look at this after starting the story that continues this thread. This is a nice story, sweet and to the point. Now, in the next story, I hope that our pair of young loves remember Ron's words.

Thanks. Jimmy
1/29/2021 c1 Bobtrumpet
Nice. Is there more to come, or just a one-shot? In either case, thanks.
5/29/2019 c1 Derek
Kim saying to Ron come with me to whatever college I choose OK
12/16/2009 c1 fett911
good more story less coment k zack k
12/15/2009 c1 26Sentinel103
Very good GQ also very left open. KP does leave and Ron will cope somehow. That is unless he goes into depression and feels he has to do something himself.

Five years is a long time to wait.

Larry (Sentinel 103)
11/23/2009 c1 HotRod96
Very,very,very,good story. i didn't see any mistakes. And you were actually able to 'put yourself in the characters shoes' so to speak.
7/27/2009 c1 52Rye-bread
I had to carefully reread the story. "Ron, you numbskull," I said to myself. "What good is it of thinking the words 'You Are My Home' if you don't say them?"

But he did say them. Those words sum up everything. "I love you" has been oversaid into triviality. But "You are my home"-THAT'S a powerful declaration.
7/3/2009 c1 BeXcca
Made me Cry :) wonderful job :3
9/5/2008 c1 ghf76riuvf4

i checked the song on youtube

nd i LUV it

it made me cry

keep up the great writin

extremely touchin

9/5/2008 c1 15screaming phoenix
Well done.You conjured up some very powerful images with this.
9/5/2008 c1 lovetoread
Great job - the song really fit the story line. You just need to fix a few punctuation errors. The emotional impact was right on, and I liked the imagery.

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