11/7/2008 c32 7montecristo709
wow man nice job on the chap...keep it up and about time someone else is starting to review u'r story lol
wow man nice job on the chap...keep it up and about time someone else is starting to review u'r story lol
11/7/2008 c32 7Raine Moon
Wow, these are good chapters and a great storyline and if anyone as the time you could come and see my story A Legend Arise when i'll start writing big time
Wow, these are good chapters and a great storyline and if anyone as the time you could come and see my story A Legend Arise when i'll start writing big time
11/5/2008 c31 7montecristo709
aw how cute...lol that part were i slash metal gear...trunk's burning attack move lol...Bye Bye...Eat This. lmao...keep it up man
aw how cute...lol that part were i slash metal gear...trunk's burning attack move lol...Bye Bye...Eat This. lmao...keep it up man
11/3/2008 c30 montecristo709
i had a feeling it was Revan, but my version of battle with Warfang will be up..probably at night or tomorrow...gonna add one more chap before the battle...also nice job on how u expliained things, keep it up
i had a feeling it was Revan, but my version of battle with Warfang will be up..probably at night or tomorrow...gonna add one more chap before the battle...also nice job on how u expliained things, keep it up
11/1/2008 c29 montecristo709
lol his ass is grass keep it up and the burned lands did pss me off a bit cuz i had to save up my fury attacks at certian times which kind a blows
lol his ass is grass keep it up and the burned lands did pss me off a bit cuz i had to save up my fury attacks at certian times which kind a blows
11/1/2008 c28 montecristo709
lol Metal Gear from the game...Metal Gear Solid...they are so good...lmao...i'm still stuck in Imperial city, i nearly forgot about Warfang lol keep it up man...and i take it that u beated the game
lol Metal Gear from the game...Metal Gear Solid...they are so good...lmao...i'm still stuck in Imperial city, i nearly forgot about Warfang lol keep it up man...and i take it that u beated the game
10/30/2008 c27 montecristo709
about time u update man, keep up the good work...did u beat the game yet by any chance?
about time u update man, keep up the good work...did u beat the game yet by any chance?
10/26/2008 c25 montecristo709
hey man nice job on the chap, can't wait to read wat happens next.have i forgot to mentio that Luna in my story is,...oh wait Leon is with ember in u'r story...oh well...cuz in my story Luna is with Leon lol but you can find a good man for her right? anyways update soon
hey man nice job on the chap, can't wait to read wat happens next.have i forgot to mentio that Luna in my story is,...oh wait Leon is with ember in u'r story...oh well...cuz in my story Luna is with Leon lol but you can find a good man for her right? anyways update soon
10/24/2008 c24 montecristo709
Hey man nice chap, can't wait to see wat happens next oh and one more thing FINISH THE GAME!
Hey man nice chap, can't wait to see wat happens next oh and one more thing FINISH THE GAME!
10/22/2008 c23 montecristo709
wow good chap man. Well in my story i wanted to call The Dark God Luciefer, but i'm keeping that surprise till the end. Anyways, i no that i said i was going to try and update but the thing is, i harldy have the time. High school, HW, all the other bullcrap. due to that it has slowed me down a lot, but it has given me some good ideas for the story.
Anways. Dragon Lord Mark signing out!...and wishing u luck in life
wow good chap man. Well in my story i wanted to call The Dark God Luciefer, but i'm keeping that surprise till the end. Anyways, i no that i said i was going to try and update but the thing is, i harldy have the time. High school, HW, all the other bullcrap. due to that it has slowed me down a lot, but it has given me some good ideas for the story.
Anways. Dragon Lord Mark signing out!...and wishing u luck in life
10/20/2008 c22 montecristo709
wow dude...just cause u added another chap and it was great i feel like updating my story
wow dude...just cause u added another chap and it was great i feel like updating my story
10/17/2008 c20 montecristo709
-_- lamest author's note evea. lol. ima try and type another one, don't forget who Will really is man
-_- lamest author's note evea. lol. ima try and type another one, don't forget who Will really is man
10/17/2008 c19 montecristo709
lol i don't mind...i crash my ride many times in Carbon, but no biggy, they escape with ease. I might update soon that is if i feel like i can or have the time. Seriously High school brings me down like *
lol i don't mind...i crash my ride many times in Carbon, but no biggy, they escape with ease. I might update soon that is if i feel like i can or have the time. Seriously High school brings me down like *