7/12/2009 c1 42QuixoticQuest
Aw, cute. I like the Luna/Neville pairing. It works. ^_^
I also like the more vulnerable side of Luna.
Aw, cute. I like the Luna/Neville pairing. It works. ^_^
I also like the more vulnerable side of Luna.
9/16/2008 c1 5kz and the snazzy plotbunnies
Wow. This story was amazingly written. It was very sweet!
Wow. This story was amazingly written. It was very sweet!
9/7/2008 c1 18Winterluna
I loved that little one shot. I liked the way you incorporated fabric with a person's holes and patches in their heart. It was very heart-warming.
I loved that little one shot. I liked the way you incorporated fabric with a person's holes and patches in their heart. It was very heart-warming.
9/7/2008 c1 4littlelightbulb
i thought the beginning was very nice- i loved the idea of the fabric falling apart, and there were some beautifully written parts. in particular, "...until all i had was frayed silk. So beautiful in its own right, but ever so delicate." but i wonder if luna could be that introspective...she just seems very normal here. maybe if she was describing wrackspurt webs, or something. i don't know. and this is probably just me, b/c i'm so picky, but i thought the ending was a bit corny. and that you used the word snag too often. but other than that, i honestly thought it was beautifully written. nice job!
i thought the beginning was very nice- i loved the idea of the fabric falling apart, and there were some beautifully written parts. in particular, "...until all i had was frayed silk. So beautiful in its own right, but ever so delicate." but i wonder if luna could be that introspective...she just seems very normal here. maybe if she was describing wrackspurt webs, or something. i don't know. and this is probably just me, b/c i'm so picky, but i thought the ending was a bit corny. and that you used the word snag too often. but other than that, i honestly thought it was beautifully written. nice job!