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9/20/2008 c1 43Jammeke
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us! I like how several authors are now using the same background idea for Brendan, because his character is really starting to develop in my mind. Some authors on fanfiction help me do that and you are definitely one of them- both with SGA and Thoughtcrimes. I liked how concerned Freya got and the fact that she wanted to feed him was just funny. Joe does look particularly thin in Thoughtcrimes, er? Anyway, I enjoyed reading this story and I am looking forward to your next project!
9/15/2008 c1 Space1Traveler
That was lovely. I love the way Freya get into her 'take charge' mode when she thinks that Brendan is hurting in any way, mentally or physically. Nicely done. It seems like its been a while since someone has addressed Brendan and Freya. Glad you remembered them.

Are there any fics where Brendan experiences the ability to read Freya's mind due to a fluke of circumstances?
9/12/2008 c1 Dugleik
I love yhis verse, with it's brilliant character portrails and believable setting. Snapps to you.
9/10/2008 c1 Delka
Great way to explain why he never eats enough. Thanks again.
9/8/2008 c1 2faldo
I had already read those other stories you mentioned at the beginning and I really enjoyed this one too. Thanks and DO keep your stories coming - I always enjoy them.
9/7/2008 c1 7godsdaughter77
I really like the story and all how Brendan adn Freya look out for each other! Great job! :D
9/7/2008 c1 8pfyre1
oh - this was really good - I do love Freya doing her best to be there for Brendan and him not really ready to deal with things that he's dealing with anyway - gonna have to go back and reread the other stories :D

brava!
9/7/2008 c1 23ga unicorn
Very nicely done. Not so angsty that I need to apply chocolate to my psyche, but enough to stroke my h/c addiction. Thanks for sharing.
9/7/2008 c1 Sheppardster
Another great Thoughtcrimes fic. Beautifully done. Thank you.

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